• Member Since 3rd Dec, 2014
  • offline last seen May 9th, 2021

Harmony Split

Love has no desire but to fulfill itself. To melt and be like a running brook that sings its melody to the night. To wake at dawn with a winged heart and give thanks for another day of loving


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Aww. Such an adorable ending. Here's to the happy couple! *raises beer*

-Two hours later-
:applejackconfused: Why is the ceiling on the door?


Sign of a good night!

Ahh. Makes sense.
(I've actually haven't drank any alcohol, I just have friends who love the stuff.)

And we're not done with Night Watch and Blue Moon at all^^



Whelp, I'm conflicted.

As a story, it seems troped to all hell and highly OP/Author-Ex-Machina. Though, it fills the "clop-with-plot" role quite nicely, I must admit. It feels more like a story that you threw clop into, rather then the latter.

Now, as much as the story was meh and pushed all of my wrong buttons, it was well written. Your grammar was good. You're vocabulary and sentence structure were advanced, to say the least. And your general writing style flowed nicely. I actually managed to push through and read this 'til the end because of that fact. Not the greatest fan of the storyline, but the writing and style kept me entertained and invested enough to see it through.

All-in-all, I feel like this was a personal, fantasy story, rather then one meant to entertain the masses. This is fine, and considering your writing is pronominal, I actually can't wait to check out your other published work.

I give the story a casual shrug, but I give you, the author, two thumbs up.

~ Neon Lights

Thanks :twilightsmile:
Heh, my writing improved quite a bunch in the year I'm already here!

I absolutely LOVED this series! Please ScratchnTavi, please make more!:pinkiehappy:

Who said I'm done with Blue Moon and Night Watch?
There will be much more, promised! :twilightsmile:

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