A parody fan fiction of Human in Equestria stories. Much of the scenes are based off the unrealistic actions HiE fics tend to create.
The two teenagers James and Scott have entered Equestria through a portal. The duo must fight to survive as their actions cause the world to fall into pieces around them.
Authors Note: While it is a parody, it does have a story which may or may not be unique, I honestly have no idea if I have accidentily ripped off it without noticing. No, the description is not intentionally bad, its just hard to not give away the plot points.
Chapters (12)
Im really, really sorry about this fellow bronies
“I’m sorry about James, he’s really a nice guy, but he really hates bronies like me”
What I actually would have said "I'm sorry about James, He's a nice guy... But he's a dick."
689070 but then scott, it wouldn't contrast what you said, maybe i should change it before it goes up, but i think edits reset the queue
'You've got tickets on your self.'
That's what I thought when reading this.
This was bad man I mean bad you broke the rule man never ever send bronies to Equestria.
That's like a carnal sin in HIE stories premise was weak and chances for go humor over looked.
But all in all not so bad that I could not suffer through it.
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Do it again and my troops will take care of you.
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“And now that I think about it, maybe I shouldn’t be a offensive stereotype of bronies in a MLP fan fiction” Scoot ignored what he said and ran over to the pony, attemptixng to hug her before being painfully bucked in the balls and shoved away.
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I have not read this story but I can't help but notice your drawing with Twilight.
You have no idea how awesome this story is. You better write more of it. It's just too glorious not to continue. I'd also include all the really good parts, but then I'd wind up just reposting the entire chapter as a comment.
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WTH IS UP WITH THE PHOTO
This is so bad that it is good...
yet hilarious, dont know if calling you an idiot or a genius, you are both! 
I think I'm retarded after reading this... I WANT MOAR!!!!!!!!
this...... is....... to good for.... me.......... MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
moar.
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"These ponies have weird names for Tramp Stamps"
Loooooooooooooooooool
Ya I'm gonna call them tramp stamps from now on
I just want to say except for rarity dying, this is a lot like how I imagine it would lol
Moar moar!
Yeah this is an awesome story please continue it.
eh, this crap is teetering on the border between completely awful and so-bad-that-it's-good.
Oh and your grammar sucks.... it's 'HOOVES' not 'hoofs' GAWD!
690260 i dident draw that
690811 i know that, i left some purpose mistakes in for grammer nazis
690294 tats the best picture i could find when i searched "facehoof".
All i'm sayin is, I LOVE THIS BLOODY INTERNET
690409 I would kill her, or I could make her the new god of equestria MWHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHHAA.
ya know, by using pinkie pie logic
690260 Where did you dig it up? That is amusing
691113 click the word source underneath the picture
689088 what does that even mean?
And people, sadly I could not find a meme of homer simpson riding the toy giant squid, yelling im happy
691300 1. it's called Google. Use it.
2. It means 'you're full of yourself.'
3. Stuff homer simpson find a pic of peter griffon riding a mechanical bull.
oh and sorry people, i'm running out of jokes, there will only be 1 more chapter
691385 But there's so much more material! You can't end it so soon!
Not bad...destroying everything bronies love.
691460 true, i want to, i guess i wont skip over how they get back to the portal
691617 it is fun to destroy things people love. Its also fun to make fun of yourself. However all this getting bucked in the balls is not just to insult bronys, but to insult my actual friend scott (aussie rebel, hes top of comments) who used to constantly get sack-waked
691702
It's always satisfying to screw over good friend. Are you going to destroy Manehatten next?
691712 I dont know enough about it, i was think of making this longer, so i dont know, well, i guess we can go to manehatten, the problem is is that there isn't much known about manehatten. You have given me alot to think about. Although im now regreting destroying two of the three places that have had major parts in the show
i dident think this one through
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I can relate to not thinking your plot ideas through. However, since not much is known about Manehatten it gives a you a creative license where you can make it into what ever you want it to be...same can be said about any other city.
691843 ok then, it will now be the city of super ponys, BATPONY AWAY!!!
im not kidding
691843 wait, creative license, but now everyone we see my complete lack of creativity
Thankfully, im writing a parody, so that died a LONG time ago.
Well i guess the cantorlot chapter can wait :D
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Save the capital for last.
689088 I tried to be more of an asshole then usual in the fic. Hense the arson, murder, canobolism and semi nuking cloudsdale
Sounds bout right
People, simply because you were nice enough to scream MOAR in the comments, im going to make FUCKTONS of plotholes, and unexaplained shit. Because you know, im an asshole
691330 but in that simpsons scene, he actually says "IM HAPPY"
......................................... I hate you, so much right now.
692789 yeah, your balls are gonna be sore from that one for another 4 chapters
690283 BEST. GIF. EVER. I WANT IT
692802 The next time i see you i will hurt you. (Just wanted to let you know.)
692820 No it isn't. more like the third or fourth.
692842 why do u want to hurt me
because a fictional version of you got bucked in the balls for the 6th time now
Ill hopefully do chapter 4 (manehatten) by Wednesday, even if i complete it today or tomorrow, because me releasing this afternoon ment I didn't get bumped to top of updates
and therefore 0 increase in views/likes
IMO, the intro can be the most fun to write.
693348 always the worst for me, only way i could think to push it on was to constantly break the 4th wall