• Member Since 29th Feb, 2012
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Jet Howitzer


If you close your eyes, it's like nothing's ever changed.

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Penumbra, an astronomer, has observed the skies for years. Hundreds of of theories have been made, and proved or disproved by his works. Now, though, he's made a new discovery.

This will be a collection of tales, rather than one continuous tale. It will tell the whole story, but from different perspectives. As it continues I will edit the description as needed

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Comments ( 9 )

First, and tracked

I'm liking what I'm reading here...

Another Howitzer story?

I'm intrigued :moustache:

Well, this doesn't work unless this is a lot AU. When Nightmare Moon showed up the sun didn't rise on time, and Then there is Discord playing around with the Sun and the Moon, while Discord is more powerful and you could just use that instead as an reason for him doing that messing. Oh well, interesting idea but not something I'll read.

811639 I'm going along a different route with this, but now that you've brought it up it seems eerily appropriate.

Get a grip on your tense shifts. Now. :facehoof:

1743984 I'd much rather keep them as they are. This is an old piece that I wrote, and I am well aware of the fact that I shift tenses. It's an ongoing problem that I am attempting to address, but I'm also trying to work on plot development, and I think it's fairly obvious which is more important to the flow of a story.

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