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Vertigo-01


"The body exists only to verify one's own existence."

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“You’re a good friend, Rainbow. I trust you… probably more than you know. So… I figured I would share this with you.”

Says the pony who decided to humiliated said friend when she went overboard with bragging.

Two giant, violet eyes stared cross-eyed directly back at her.

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She lost a competition to somepony like Twilight.

It's happened before. The running of the leaves.

Wait... What's the Vore for then??

6567646 Oh, what? No, I wasn't correcting you! In a way, it fits Rainbow's character anyways. In the canon, she's forgetful, so it makes sense that she'd forget that.

6567580 Now I feel bad. I made 2nd best of the Mane 6 cry.

Consider my interest peeked, I'll be watching this one!

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This is all new territory for Twi, save the crappy dreams. Let her get a feel for things and we'll see.

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Ah well. "Fight" fits the plot better than "competition" anyway, I figure.

Maybe Twi should consider adjusting the spell to deal with the pain issues. :rainbowlaugh:

Oh no, Twilight is going to hate herself, the poor thing. She's going to think she's a terrible pony if this is how her first experience with fantisizing went.

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Then she decides to end Dash's misery and it all goes from there.

EDIT: Where are all the dislikes coming from?

Do you plan on still doing 4 chapters per day, or was that a two-time thing?

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Nah, just kinda happened like that. Should have more to come soon, though.

Haha, this is really good. It isn't even something I'm into, but you're approaching it so darn well. :twilightsmile:

Okay, I don't quite get it. Don't get me wrong, this story is going great. I just don't see how showing Twilight that she enjoys eating her friends is suppose to make her feel better about herself.

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We're getting to that, slowly but surely. :twilightsmile:

I didn’t think to do any further research beforehand on it since I’ve been using the same tome for years

Beforehoof

Without even thinking, she chunked the lithe paperback at Rainbow’s head,

chucked

the brain switches its focus to the situation at-hand

at-hoof

“But trust me, if you knew some of the things I did about some of the ponies I’ve met… among other winged creatures,”

What is it you do?! I want to know!

Wooooh! New chapters have been read! Can't wait for an update! Especially when those two start exploring their fetishes for other reasons, if ya know what I mean. :raritywink:

It's weird seeing Rainbow being the one with her head (mostly) on straight. :rainbowlaugh:

Ah okay, so Twilight is slowly figuring out that she's a dominatrix. And Dash is rediscovering her submissive side. Obviously something traumatized Dash (most likely something Gilda did) in the past and up until now submitting scared her. And now they get to help each other. Twilight can learn that dominating in reality doesn't have to be as extreme as crushing ponies, and Dash can learn to trust again. This is going be good.:twilightsmile:

6575004 Oooo, there's going to be lots of build-up? Awesome, this is going to be even better.:pinkiehappy:

HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH HAH HAH HEH HEH HOH HOH

etc.

CONTINUE, BY ALL MEANS!

Let's get to it! I want to see how this one will end! And, to be entirely honest, when I first started reading this, I thought that there might end up having a situation like this story.

I'm honestly bewildered this is getting downvoted. :derpyderp2:

6577862 I don't know if I should be relieved or saddened...

Okay, so Twilight is still expressing her dominance by crushing ponies it seems. At least I'm assuming that's what is going to happen in the dream-state? Do we get to see that next chapter? I hope Twilight finds a more subtle way to express her dominance, something she can in real life.

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I was actually going to say something about this in the notes, but decided against it. The next couple chapters will in fact explore the fetish further. But the story won't end there. I'll say that much and leave it at that.

Says the guy who promised no spoilers in a blog. :trollestia:

I think I have answers for most of the potential FAQs, just not the historical ones. :rainbowlaugh:

6577414 it's because fetishes are involved, even if it not a clopfic. having more upvotes than downvotes means you are doing great since there seems to be a dozen or so of people who go searching for these fics and downvote them

Comment posted by SuperSaiyanTeemo deleted Oct 30th, 2015
Comment posted by SuperSaiyanTeemo deleted Oct 30th, 2015

6581548 Oh, a "stop liking what I don't" brigade. I'll never get that kind of behaviour. :rainbowlaugh:

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I've noticed that's been the case with several fetish fics – at least the more uncommon ones. Either way, I'm enjoying writing this, and it appears there's a few others who are enjoying it as well. So it's all good by me. :twilightsmile:

Well... Rainbow is truly the best pegasus.

I kinda assumed Twi wasn't using her wings and horn because it just wasn't an aspect of the 'giant' play, as she perceives it. :rainbowlaugh:

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I intended to take it solely that direction at one point. It would make sense since she's not a hooves-on kind of pony like Applejack, and this could serve as one possible physical outlet.

It still is, as we've already seen. But...

She needs to put Rainbow in her place, first.

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