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Jesse Coffey


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In this, the first season of this new sitcom, Rarity has finally been convinced by Applejack to add a colt in order to even the family! The colt, as sent forth by the Adopters of Canterlot, is a quiet, quirky mule who was freed from his druggy family a while ago. Rarity, a mare with notable respect for all different cultures and religions, subsequently gets pestered by a nasty side of her that makes her quite uncomfortable with having a mule for a son, such that her new task is to try and learn to be a good mother to colts and mules. And she's the one who'll have to learn how to understand them!

Created by Dana Woolery, AKA the Dyslexic Foal.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 3 )

I feel that the writing a really award, it could use some rewrite to make it should less clunky. The idea could be good, but it doesn't should like you know how the adoption system work.

Not sure why this has so many dislikes(along without of your other stories I spotted. I'll check it out later.

Ok, I just read it and I only have one thing to say... huh? Like, I don't understand what's going on. I'm not disliking this btw but this does seem interesting once fixed.

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