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Jesse Coffey


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Pinkie Pie's epic opus about a Lonely person by the Name of Sunset Shimmer who discovers she is a nobody at Canterlot High. Each chapter is obviously under 1000 words!

Chapters (7)
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Comments ( 9 )

What exactly did I just read?

6042235

I'm asking the same thing...

I'm so confused..

You know what I'm just gonna give my go to answer.

Brah, we smoked some weed before we came here.

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6042235
It's like that because the actual source material was a story like that. Problem is, I injected mine with intentional hilarity, while Dark Rarity's story got humourous value all by itself - and didn't need to be sold or marketed as having such.

Kudos for the blatant and shameless self-promotion in the Sunset Shimmer group. :pinkiecrazy:

As for the actual story... good attempt, but I seriously don't understand what I read. :rainbowhuh:

6075616 That's the whole point of this story. You are not supposed to understand it, you're supposed to be entertained by it and the fact that it is intentionally a lot funnier than Dark Rarity's story consisting of similarly short chapters (which you can see by clicking here).

6075632 Yeah, but it's not really entertaining. I didn't find it funny at all. In fact I'd say I liked the other one better. I'm not trying to be rude, honestly. I personally just didn't find any humor in it.

6075603

I get what your saying, just to me this story makes no sense, neither did the original.

You took an extremely downvoted story and made a new story with it. You didn't really change anything and regretfully I don't think it will get a good response. I'm not saying this to be rude, I'm just stating what I see.

Good try, funny promotion, but this isn't my cup of tea.

6075687 I know that. This story is designed to point this out. It's in the tradition of the old Stan Freberg records, where Freberg, while not changing things in the parody, pointed out what was wrong with the original in the parody.

6075603

that explains a lot, thank you.

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