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I presume you meant, "after the Sun had set"?
Other than that, I can see a few other grammatical errors, but nothing too serious. I'd recommend pasting this fic into a Word document and running a spellcheck -- that should pick up most of any slips you made.
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Thank you for that, just wondering if it was good or not, but happy to see i only have a few errors. They'll be fixed no problem
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Ok, I have to admit that I haven't read this, but the name Macarena cracked me up.
Nice story, but there's some minor things you may want to edit.
"another's"
"brother's".
"Applejack's".
Really not bad... AJ climax was a bit to composed for my liking...