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Oh hell the buck yes.
I really enjoy this take on Big Mac.
He's observant, has a million thoughts running through his head at a given moment, and possesses an expansive vocabulary (for a workhorse anyway). Yet you'll be lucky to get more than 1 word out of him.
Looking forward to future chapters.
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^.^ Thank you! I do my best.
I don't get why this is being downvoted so miserably. It's a fine enough story, the first person narrative you've got isn't trite or cliche, and there are definitely bits of inner-monologuing I could see that giant sexy idiot Mac thinking. Mac comes off as unique in this, so does Caramel, it's a nice change from all he 'Caramel is shy and reserved, and Mac is a lovesick dope' stuff at least. There's a few spelling errors, but other than that it's not anywhere close to bad, I'd say.
Keep up the good work, champ :-)
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Thank you! Did you know that this morning I woke up all like, "oh, screw this fanfic stuff. I'm going to go write some original fiction." So, good timing. ;) Imma go write some horse stories, now.
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I mean, writing anything, horse or non-horse related is usually a better way to spend time than jackin' around, right?
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More fun than video games.
6585584 It's being downvoted because most people who come to FIMFiction are basic and unimaginative, looking for straight second-person self-insert HiE stories, to live out their fantasies. Even the slightest bit of homoerotica sets that particular crowd off into a frenzy of fury.
This is good clop. Seriously.
6611390 Thanks!
I don't think my being bisexual helps me much either -- got a little burst of downvotes when I posted the M/F/F chapter. But I love both the mares, and the pony-bears!
Oh well. I've gotten a lot of positive feedback, too, though! I'll just keep holding my finger over the downvotes when I check the stats. :D
I can not wait to readeth this.
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If your name reflects your lifestyle, then it is good to meet a brother in arms.
6611522 Join the club, brother.
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You deserve a lot more in terms of upvotes than you're getting.
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Hmmm. No stories. I've made a note to write a rootbeer-based fic at some point in the future. ;D
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I sure think so. ^.^ Thank you!!!
6611576 I will make a folder just for that.
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Can't accept the fact that Big Mac still gets all the mares. Bias? What bias...
I'm not usually one for clop but the drama in this fic is great. Take all of my up votes
I still don't get why this is getting down voted. Like, beyond it being a story about two fellers slapping their dangly bits together, there's nothing really 'wrong' with it; the way you do first person narrative never really makes Mac seem 'Edgy' or 'Whiney' like a lot of stories tend to do. He's different than how people normally write him, but, like, good different.
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I mean, they call him the Mac for a reason, right? :D
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Thank you!
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I am all about the drama.
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Tasty, tasty upvotes!
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Edgy or whiny are two things I cannot imagine Mac being.
He and Fluttershy are the two characters I identify most with. Though maybe if Marble ever gets some development it'll be her, too. Anyway, so I tend to be self-inserty about the way I write them: quiet, thoughtful, repressed, pervy, insecure.
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Did I not say thank you for this? Thank you!
I can't fathom how this has any thumbs down! This work is excellent please continue! There are so many actual relationships that go this way...
Wow, I am in love with this story. I think it's getting down voted unfairly because A) bronies tend to hate first person fic and B) they aren't ready for Mac to be an actual mans man. You make him very "human" and his thought process of denial about himself feels very real.
Also I LOVE your portrayal of Fluttershy. She got pissed and basically forced Macs family to give up a large portion of their money making potential for some stupid bats with no consideration to how much profit the Acres lost.
I normally won't read a story that isn't finished, because that cliffhanger feeling is a thing that bugs me.
That said, I read this anyway. Mommy's going to demand that you keep going until she's had her fill. ;>
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Wait, Bronies don't like FIRST PERSON NARRATIVES? That's like hating flat-head screwdrivers!
RE: Fluttershy. Yes. Also, Scare Master.
As a person with moderate-to-severe anxiety, I know that anxiety leads to a lot of repression and anger, and anger leads to the dark side. But is it weird that I love her even more because she's evil?
Anyway, thank you so much! Means a lot, as always.
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Yes, Mommy. ^.^
Also, I need to write a story where someone actually lets Flutters keep going with the Mommy thing...
I am loving your portrayal of each and every character, man. Don't you pay any mind to the blockheads votebombing this, and keep up the good work!
I'm sure I'll have more coherent thoughts to relay when I'm good and conscious, but by Luna's teats this is amazing. Liked, watched, followed.
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Mmm, Luna's teats...
Try and set yourself a mental policy to ignore about 30-40% of the downvotes that are not accompanied by comments explaining WHY the person downvoted. I've written under other monikers on other sites and believe that a simple like/dislike rating system is an easily-manipulable and otherwise wholly useless method of actually determining likes and dislikes unless the reader is willing to include comments as to WHY they disliked it.
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To be fair, this was pretty rough when I put it up. But I've done several rolling rewrites, found an awesome editor, drew cute new cover art, and it's still getting downvotes! I don't get it.
But, I also care way more about all the positive feedback I've gotten than the downvotes. I DO wish people would comment instead of just downvoting, though. If they had valid concerns, I could address them!
Lost more sleep reading. No regrets.
This story is seriously becoming one of my favorites here.
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Yay!
This is an amazing story! The involved plot and thought process of Macintosh is believable and engaging. I very much want to see how his struggle with his sexuality will progress. Overall very well done, and this story deserves more love than it's received so far. Liked, faved, and thumbs up, please continue this
More please! Can't wait to see where this is headed.
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Workin' on it! Endings are hard, but first draft is going well. Then I have to rewite, and run the whole thing by poor Cerulean.
Hot damn~ Good job man. :3
Can't decide if that's the best or worst safeword ever for Mac, but... Nah. It fits.
Just like Trouble.Also Cheerilee? Cheerilee needs to get in on that. Feels like she's been getting the short end of the deal, of her own volition. Can't argue she enjoyed the show, but let's face it, she's got her own supply of Twilight Special, and has had it for hire long, exactly? She knows she'll be making good use of it.
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I feel like Cheerilee's motivation is kind of the weakest link in the story, but now that I have me weird 4-way mixed orientation polyamourous clan to do sequels about, I have to say it was worth it.
I really like that, I came into this expecting to read a pretty run of the mill, stuck-in-the-closet dramatic story, and that you've averted all the cliches and turned this into something really unique. I honestly didn't expect things to go swimmingly with Cheerilee, Mac, Trouble Shoes and Caramel, but, I suppose supervised sex between two consenting adults and their partners sort of takes the hurt away.
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Glad to hear from you again. You literally saved this story, sir. Thanks for your support!
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Aww, shucks. You and your silver tongue...
I'm glad you stuck with it. I get a little weak in the knees and light headed when I see an update on this story. It's like a small-scale gift from time to time. Keeps the blood pumping, y'know?
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Yay! Blitz was more popular (and, perhaps not coincidentally, much straighter), but Hot Harvest is still my favorite story I've written.
Maybe I should do a sequel? :D
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I ought to check out Blitz. If it's anything like this, what with the dark and dreary overlying themes, I'm sure it'll be great.
Sequels are always good. People knock 'em, and frequently, but everyone forgets that Terminator 2 is clearly the better film. I'm confident that you could do a sequel and not make it a giant bag of call backs and fanfare.
I loved the first person narrative! It's well written for a clop story! So, is Big Mac's thing with Cheerilee over, or are we going to be seeing her in later chapters?
PS Edit was to add a forgotten emote.
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Uh, okay. I'll take what I can get!
They do get married! Legally the four of them are two married couples living together. My Equestria doesn't have plural marriage (understandably -- that would be a huge mess, legally speaking), but for all intents and purposes, Trouble, Caramel, and Cheerilee are Mac's harem now! See my new story A Night in Shining Armor for some of how that works out in practice. They're, ahem, very OPEN.
I want to do a story about Mac and Cheerliee's wedding, at some point.