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Hmm, Macintosh, Macintosh... I know there's a "downloading" joke in there somewhere.
Well, with a setup like that, how could I not be interested?
and pretty awesome
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Plug it in plug it in~
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Um, I, uh... Okay.
Now I'm not saying throw AJ in there for an applesome... but throw AJ in there for an applesome!
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See, thing is I would, but I don't think I understand enough about female anatomy or psychology to write her in.
4219975 anatomy, she has a back hole that needs filling.
phycology... um... 'fuck me brothah and/or cuzzin!' it doesn't really need to be that deep. no pun intended.
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That was kinda the point.
4219975 Also his sister {ME} would totally kill him for putting AJ in a clop-fic. She' mine.
I have ABSOLUTELY no idea why, or how my brain is so perverted, but I kept picturing your OC instead of Braeburn. I NEED BRAIN BLEACH, BRO!!
I wimped out only a paragraph into the clop part!
Pretty decent. Set up is relatively common, with a character admitting a crush, and then it immediately leading to sex.
Foreplay was great, loved the time you took to describe them touching each other and tasting one another. That was all very enjoyable. Kind of became a little difficult to follow after the initial orgasm, especially when Mac started tutting braes butt. Felt extremely rushed to finish on that point.
Overall not bad. Change some of the word choice and expand on some of the detail, and you'd have an impressive fic here.
Looks like Kingfish installed some Mac OS XXX Mountain Pony on this Macintosh
Th one thing wrong with this is.......
I was in a classroom. And I had a nosebleed. Celestia bless the fact that I shut it off in time to get everyone off my case about the nosebleed!
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Indeed it was extremely rushed. By that point it was probably 4:00 a.m., and I was just trying to get it finished so that I could get some sleep. I may rewrite it at some point in the future.
Also, sorry I took so long to reply.
This is some really good porn, to be blunt. Pre-porn dialogue was pretty in-character too, and the dirty talk during was 👌🏻