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Sees spoiler. "Double penetration". Laughs way too hard.
"It is like sex but if there were two penises" ~ IGN
That was good, no grammar mistakes, makes me very happy, my only suggestion to make this better is diction, not saying it's bad but diction is the icing on the cake and I feel like it would make me score this as a ten out of ten but I will give it a nine, it's one the better stories on here.
Spike should double penetrate the rest of them.
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I was having a lot of trouble with that. I don't have much experience writing straight clop, and there are only so many words for "vagina" that don't sound silly.
True this is a clop, what was I thinking?
Story sounded good til the spoiler got to rimming and felching.
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I don't think you're one of my regulars.
Whaaat? Either the tags lied, or I somehow missed the rimming and feltching.
Still a good story, but it'd be far better with them. Great work with the buildup and grammar. That really impressed me! 
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I took out the rimming, and I was just about to change the description accordingly. The felching is still there, though; it counts with vaginas, too, FYI.
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There. I added a chapter without the felching. I really should have thought about who my target audience was.
Wow that was really fucking good. I enjoyed the hell out of it.
I am pretty glad you went dual-dong over a knotted cock. We always need more of that! Personally I am more down with cum inflation added to the mix but it still was fantastic.
Now we need Twi to get into stretching so you can get both cocks in one hole :P
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Boy, that last one's not a bad idea. You don't mind if I steal it, do you?
I would like to see a sequel of this. You earned this
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Awesome.
This was absolutely amazing.
5947908 My god…
that would be awesome. 
5947916 Go for it.
um there was no felching only creampie eating, not complaining but felching is sucking semen out of the ass.
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I quote Urban Dictionary.
5948454 ok
5947916 By all means, I am always one to encourage fetishes!
My only other thought ATM is that Twilight DOES release a book, and two mare who are into eachother want to get "spiked". One on top of the other, Spike getting them both in the pussy as they make out.
I am not planning on using either in my stories for now, and would be glad to see someone use it! :D
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On the subject of the "dual-dong," as you called it, I was listening to a reading of this story and I was inspired. Especially with the cunnilingus scene; the fancy maneuver with the tongue folding back on itself was pretty much shamelessly imitated (though I did actually write it myself).
While listening to that... ever so satisfying...
story, I realized that I had never actually read any good clops with double-dicks. I had seen some, sure, but never read any. And I figured if you want something done right, do it yourself.
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BOO!!! I hear you all saying. (Which is weird because I'm in my room alone, but whatever.)
That sounds really hot.
Hey, sexuality is a spectrum! And I just so happen to be drifting a bit at the moment.
Now that you've mentioned it will you be planning to finish Dusk Shine anytime soon?
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It's probably around fourth on my writing list, but I should get around to it eventually. Sorry, I'm a SUPER slow writer.
Just found this story randomly. Not bad at all. Wouldn't have minded a little more to it as far as Twilight analyzing him at greater length before getting to the dirty stuff, though. I tend to like elaborate buildup.
Something I was wondering about, though, when I was browsing the comments:
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Someone did a reading of one of my stories? When/where?
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Welp I know what I'm watching tonight. Thanks!
Soooo… Hawt…
i love this story! i hope to see a sequel some time soon.