Don't Tempt the Flames

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SoarinDashSpaz

SoarinDashSpaz #1 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

So is Flamethrower like the male version of Spitfire?

Diverse_Flygon

Diverse_Flygon #2 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · 1 · 1 · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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Ironically, and sadly, yes

gapaot

gapaot #3 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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What is ironic or sad about rule 63?

Diverse_Flygon

Diverse_Flygon #4 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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Oh nothing, I meant how how Spitfires r63 name is Flamethrower. Like really mate, no other better name?

gapaot

gapaot #5 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · 4 · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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Thats pretty funny, because flamethrowers spit fire.

Diverse_Flygon

Diverse_Flygon #6 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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True

Sun Dial

Sun Dial #7 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

There's not enough to comment, you need more material before we can say something about it other then, you have our attention. You need more then just the hook

Diverse_Flygon

Diverse_Flygon #8 · Sep 3rd, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

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Yeah, I know. Im working on the next part, not sure how many chapters I'll make this. The next chapter will at most be done before next week ends. So you all can fap finally

SnapCapp

SnapCapp #9 · Sep 5th, 2015 · · · How Bad Does Fire Burn? ·

I noticed a few misplaced words and a few broken sentences, but other than that it's alright. I can put up comment about the mistakes when I'm home, but it'd be a pain on my phone.

SnapCapp