So is Flamethrower like the male version of Spitfire?

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Ironically, and sadly, yes

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What is ironic or sad about rule 63?

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Oh nothing, I meant how how Spitfires r63 name is Flamethrower. Like really mate, no other better name?

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Thats pretty funny, because flamethrowers spit fire.

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True

There's not enough to comment, you need more material before we can say something about it other then, you have our attention. You need more then just the hook

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Yeah, I know. Im working on the next part, not sure how many chapters I'll make this. The next chapter will at most be done before next week ends. So you all can fap finally

I noticed a few misplaced words and a few broken sentences, but other than that it's alright. I can put up comment about the mistakes when I'm home, but it'd be a pain on my phone.