Before I became a fan of the show My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic. I didn't much care for it , or it's fandom, but there was one reason I got into it. It was the day Princess Celestia somehow came to my home!
She was hurt, and drained of her magic so I helped her out, and showed her that well...she was part of a show!
We became friends rather quickly during those weeks and soon, when she left when she was able, she would come to visit, and even though I had a spare room for her, she always asked...well I'm sure you can guess!
(On hold until further notice)
Chapters (1)
FimFiction API snooping is fun.
6313136 uh what?
6313563 I just random typed in your name into the fimfiction api searcher and this came up
I like this story.
*is curious about site and checks out*
Not going back there again... *burns computer*
6316208 did you look up her highness name? Hehe
6316450 ... nah... rather not after i saw sonic and shadow...
6316460 heh sorry.
6316462 well it's better me than
or you might have a problem
Moar
Interesting setup, looking forward to the full story.
O I am liking this story and you wear planning this for a one shot? some how I don't think so. Harts Fire will find you and I am betting I can turn this one chapter in to a full story pretty easily.
but lets put this up to the readers.
first yes I am helping with (to love a queen) would you the readers like for me to throw some input at eragon13666 about this story and see what we come up with??
pleas let us know???
Harts Fire.
PS better yet come talk with us on Team Speak about this story or just simply drop around to chat with us.
check my blog for the TS channel info, it is free.
Definitely needs a once-over by a proofreader, there are quite a few flow issues and the like.
Premise is good, this doesn't seem to be the average wham bang plot, so there's that.
Keep going! ;)
6320560
we eragon13666 and myself are looking for a proofreader if you are interested please do contact us.
this goes for any and all that are interested in proofing for eragon13666's story's.
6320896 I can't do it very often, but if you share your Google Docs folder I can pop in every once in a while for some tuning. :)
id ship it
stayclassy
I thought there would be more already, even if it is the first chapter, but it is not bad, i think I would read more.
6810087 this is a side story that I was working on as I work on To Love a Queen when I get blockage on te story this is a one shot preview. Meaning there won't be any chapters just a very very long fic
It would be rather funny if she invited him over to the castle for a 'sleep over', perhaps saying it in a innocent manner since she's come over many times. Only for him to get a feeling later on that she basically asked him out in some overly thought out plan for a date and snuggles, since she is from a mare dominant society. That could be quite the 'mind fuck' based on previous conceptions on dating though only having thought of it as her being a good host like he was being. The social queues one species misses when given by another, or unknowingly accepting or doing acts considered intimate, such as rubbing an ear or snuggling in bed.
6915905 hrm...not a bad idea, I've been meaning to et back on this when I have a major writer block on TLAQ and this may just show she a sneaky little mare thanks
6917573 Thou art welcome.
I just reread this first chapter and I must say you have so much to work with here as you have time this story needs to be worked on a bit or I should say when you get stuck on TLAQ.
grin I guess that means we need to spend a little time making plans for this story.
Harts Fire
I would really like to read more of this story.
7943966 more is coming slowly working on it.
it is feeling as if this story needs a little loving.
Love this! Please write more!!
8577872
I thinking I may, I may have to rewrite it because the first idea was this being a full oneshot story the idea would've been around 30/50,000 words but maybe I can make it a chapter base story
Add more please, I want to continue this interesting story.
8607607
I hope you do. This is a very nice story.
more?
10660532
To all reading i plan fo rewrite this story as a full one shot when I have time off work,