Cold Air

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Equestria is in bad shape, many are unemployed and Rainbow & Twilight are no exception. This is a short day in the long lives of two ponies who are madly in love.

Written for the competition hosted by The Abyss.

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FabulousNight

FabulousNight #1 · Aug 5th, 2015 · · ·

6284479 As the competition only allowed for a maximum of around 5000 words, I was unable to carry the story onto more chapters. Thank you anyways!

RainSoar-best

RainSoar-best #2 · Aug 5th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Best twidash story I have ever read! Love it keep up the good work!

FabulousNight

FabulousNight #3 · Aug 5th, 2015 · · ·

6286327 Thank you very much!

Snow ghost pony

Snow ghost pony #4 · Aug 6th, 2015 · 1 · ·

I liked this story because it is both well written, and sufficiently fluffy.

FabulousNight

FabulousNight #5 · Aug 6th, 2015 · · ·

6289839 Thank you! Your compliments flatter me.

Ryvaken

Ryvaken #6 · Aug 7th, 2015 · · ·

Setting came out of nowhere. Spent most of the time trying to figure out what was going on. Then I decided I really didn't want to know. Did not like, but still quality writing.

I suggest throwing on the AU tag. This could work as the seed for a much larger story. You've got the skills to write it.

FabulousNight

FabulousNight #7 · Aug 8th, 2015 · · ·

6293666 Hey! Thanks for the advice. This story was written for a competition which restricted the story to around 5000 words. I'm sorry you didn't enjoy it, but I hope you'll find my next story more enjoyable.

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