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BioniclesaurKing4t2


I'm an MLP/Sci-Fi crossover writer. 'Nuff said. My stories seek to answer but these three, simple questions: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SC5QT6CWiSM

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This story is a non-canon spinoff of Kamen Rider EqG


When the Hikari Studio appears nearby Canterlot High, Tsukasa has to find out what must be done in this world for which he has no sealed Rider Card.

(Kamen Rider Decade stumbles upon an A.R. World version of my "Kamen Rider EqG" story. Some details are shared between the two worlds, but don't take everything here as fact for the main story.)
(This story is most conveniently read in Indented format instead of Double Spaced.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 5 )

I'm enjoying this a lot more than I enjoyed watching Decade. I'm not sure why. The crossover aspect moves quickly, so that's nice. I'm not sure why this is side story, but I suppose that I could have simply missed something from the main one.

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The past few main chapters have been giving a series of trailers for this. As with (almost) all Decade encounters, the universe he's landed in here isn't the main one, but an "almost the same" parallel one. I designed it that way so that events here won't affect the main story in case someone missed this or didn't want to bother with Decade. On that note, things here are about as parallel to the main story as Decade-visited worlds or early summer movies were to their original seasons (some things the same, some things the same but in different ways, some things just outright different) so those who did read it could get a hint at upcoming spoiler events, but mixed in with non-upcoming events so they won't know which details are the spoilers. I'll say that I've already given some right and wrong hints in this chapter.

“Well,” Tsukasa said, turning away from them again with a tilt of his head, “I still look good anyway, no matter what I wear, or what color I am.” He flapped his jacket collar for emphasis.

“Oh, speaking of which,” Yusuke said in a suddenly calm tone, looking over Tsukasa’s shoulder, “you’re also not wearing a new silly outfit this time.”

“Ahh,” Natsumi joined in, looking over his other shoulder. “Maybe we’ve finally found a world that doesn’t know what to do with him.”

“Tsk,” replied Tsukasa.

OOH! BURN! XD

veler of the Rider Worlds.

Tsukasa brushed his palms together, then reached down and took the white booklet, the Ride Booker, and unfolded a black handle from the side, a black and silver sword blade flipping and extending out from inside; he rested the blade on his shoulder. Tsukasa rushed at the Zenobiter and slashed, but it jumped over him and ran for the alley entrance.

“Oh no you don’t,” Tsukasa breathed as he turned after it.

A block up the street, a figure in all black sat on a black motorcycle wearing a black helmet. The Zenobiter ran out of the alley and started across the street; the figure raised an indigo Advent Deck bearing the gold symbol of a horse head silhouette. Suddenly a second, pink figure ran out of the alley after the Mirror Monster.

“What the?” the first figure said, lowering the Deck. “Who’s that Rider?”

This could have used a more noticeable scene transition from Tsukasa's PoV to Cavalier's.

Tsukasa tilted his head. “Who’s interviewing who here?” No response. “I told you, I’m just passing through.”

“Then pass through, already.”

“No can do, not yet. I still have to find the problem of this world and solve it, first.”

The Rider paused to think a second. “Have it your way, then,” he replied. “Just watch your step, because I’ll be.”

Eh, that last bit. "Because I'll be". Honestly, it'd have had more of an impact if it was "Because I will". That'd have sounded a bit more threatening, considering that Cavalier is supposed to have some of Knight's personality. A simple change in wording can make all the difference.

A young man with light blue skin and jet black hair in a tan coat stood at the base of Canterlot High’s horse statue, holding the Diendriver gun in his right hand, and a duffle bag in his left. He gazed at the base of the statue and the portal contained within, the one true treasure of this world. Then he looked down at the duffle bag in his hand. Then back up at the statue. He sighed and shook his head.

Okay, that's clever. XP

A Kamen Rider in dark purple armor approached the group as a cloud of shadow engulfed the area. Index of Refraction

YOOOOOOO IT'S YA SNEK BOI!

In all? I liked this. A few errors here and there. Explaining puns in the middle of dialogue is a bit messy. But other than that, great job!

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OOH! BURN! XD

Okay, that's clever. XP

Thanks.

This could have used a more noticeable scene transition from Tsukasa's PoV to Cavalier's.

I thought it was sufficient.

Eh, that last bit. […]

Maybe there's a hidden reason for that word choice…?

YOOOOOOO IT'S YA SNEK BOI!

Not exactly…

That was a fun detour from the main story. And I like the ending bit at Chapter 2. That was funny.

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