Story Summary: In this MLP FiM Fic, Spike accidentally puts Princess Luna in a deep sleep after accidentally adding TOO MUCH Moon Sugar (yes, it’s a Skyrim reference), into her pot of Moonlight Milk Tea. Now, he and Twilight must find a way to wake up the sleeping beauty while trying to keep the fact from Princess Celestia and Cadence.
Copyright 2015, Hasbro Studios. All credit to Lauren Faust.
Not bad, I like the idea of this story!
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Your the first person to comment.
... THIS IS THE HAPPIEST DAY OF MY LIFE!!!!!!
And bring her back to the castle Missing word?
Weird, Funny, Enjoyable, Luna, Spike, Did I say Funny?
I did what in Spikes dream?
I did what in Raritys dream?
I wuz doin wut I Lunas dream?
Wake Up!
She's busy. . .
Twilight's pissed off now!!!!
Gee, 5 days in, and I already have 4 comments. SWEET!!
Famous last words, Mr. Murphy's Law?
I just realized something: Tiberius is worried sick about his owner!!!!
Runaway Luna is best Luna
A Lunas Witness? She doesn't look like a Druid Princess. . .
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True.
WOW! 131 VIEWS TOTAL! AND FEATUREED IN TWO GROUPS.
Huh, I may be underestimating myself.
Spike hater.
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Hey, don't get the wrong idea. I love Spike. I just wanted to find an cheesy outrageous ending for my story.
Spike Mustache.
6856307 Many others in the fandom starting to hate Spike for no reasons it's like the Derpy incident all over again.
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Wow. People really must not like Derpy.
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I am aware of what I wrote. Granted, it probably was shit Idea from the beginning.
But, it was my FIRST FiM Fiction, and I was immature back then. But through some consideration and some REALLY brutally honest comments, I have matured and gotten better with my writing. So I can't disagree with you there. This was one of the most EMBARASSING, INAPPROPRIATE, UNDERRATED story I have ever written.
Nonetheless, I have pride in what I do. Ever horrible story/chapter I write is a reminder that I can do better.
That being said...
Yeeeah, this should've never been attempted.