Hi everyone. It's me OtakuBrony47. Writer of Heavy Sleeping Princess (an a few others). To state the obvious, this was my FIRST FiM fiction. I didn't know what to write about, and so I just wrote what popped into my mind. The result. Well, this. Now, I know some of you enjoyed this story for its randomness and Naughty Humor (see chapters three and four). Others found it too...obscene or distasteful. But I know for a fact the majority of you were Less Than Satisfied with the Ending.
So, they finally wake up Luna (after she falls into a pound and get's hot tea dumped on her face) and Spike gets banished to another dimension. Also, Props to You if ya' got the Fallout 3 cameo/references. Anyway, time for me to point out what I thought about my own story and why I wrote it. In case you guys didn't figure it out by the third chapter, this story was inspired (more like a knock off) of an episode from Chowder, titled, Heavy Sleeper. Yeah, you see where I'm going with this.
Anyway, at first I was being serious with my work when I wrote the first and second chapters. But right at chapter three, I was getting lazy, and wanted to focus on stories with different story categories (with little success in the process). So I put this story on halt for almost a year and 3 months, if I'm assuming. By then, I just wanted to put this story behind me. So, that was that. Spike is trapped in the Capital Wasteland and Moira is his new owner.
And I know what you guys are thinking...WTF!!!?? And you're right. That was the worst way to end my story. And I agree. It was Lazy and Half-assed. But overall, I say I sort of succeeded in a way. You see, I never wanted this story to make sense. I purposely write stories that make not sense and have little to no conflict, but that soon becomes a problem for me, because when I DO try to write something with more seriousness and plot conflict, it confuses my audience, and some of my fans, and in the process tends to hurt my ratings, because I write serious matters so poorly.
Either I rush into the plot too quickly without giving the reader enough time to know what is happening and who the characters are, OR, I choose the worst way to bring up characters and conflicts in the story, and the readers gets confused, board, or uninterested. It's a problem I have in so many stories (aside from Grammar and Punctuation). Anyway, back to Heavy Sleeping Princess. I thought it started out good, but I feel I was TOO LAZY with my writing towards the end. Also, I feel I could've chosen a better way to end the story.
But, I can't grovel about it forever. I have to move on and keep writing. Anyway, those were my thoughts on Heavy Sleeping Princess, but I'm curious to know what you all thought. So let me know on the comments below. Did you guys liked it or found it enjoyable and hilarious, or was it too odd, lazy, and distasteful?
Let know what you all thought about my story, and thanks for reading.