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Glitter Grenade
Writing GLORIOUS trash. Nothing more or less.
Glitter Grenade
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Nice work
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I'm glad to hear. Thanks for reading!
6097776 no problem, Keep up the awesome work
Reading this left me wanting more milking.
IS it odd that I am now hankering for a glass of milk or two?
tis very good
Umm...I'm confused about exactly what's really going on.
Spoiler tag explanation please?
I'm still trying to figure out how she got into that situation in the first place.
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Big hint: It's a milking stall. It wouldn't have been built with restraints to hold either a unicorn or a pegasus if they were locked in. Nevermind a alicorn.
6099602
Oh I got that.
I meant, how did it go from her being strapped in and being milked to being sitting in front of the machine to examine it. Was that entire scene of Twilight being milked all in Twilight's imagination, or a simulation spell, or something?
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She cleaned up after herself with a spell, right before Big Mac came to check up on her. Remember the fizzle of magic he noticed. But she forgot the obvious, her breasts were still leaking milk.
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Ah. I see. The scene transition went by so fast, I never saw her get out of the restraints.
And...how'd she get restrained in the first place? Did the machine just grab her automatically or something?
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The implication is that Twilight decided to try out the machine, tying herself up and getting it work. One of its main problems is that it doesn't have a stable power source -Twilight kept setting of her horn but didn't teleport herself anywhere -. She kept on spinning a scenario where it seemed she'd been kidnapped and locked into the milking stall by a certain red stallion.
Why? She was acting out a fantasy of hers, being pleasured until her mind turns to mush. What starts with R and rhyme with okay?
Role-play. I guess I should have went with S or F, haha.
In another draft, I considered writing Big Mac walking in and seeing Twilight a milk covered mess. She walked to him, pressing her gushing tits into his shirt and whispered unashamedly, "I wanna buy this machine, don't ask me questions." But I went with something else subtler.
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Ah, I see.
6099707 You clever clever bastard. vignette2.wikia.nocookie.net/fallout/images/7/70/What-a-twist.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20131026094523
Its' haunting hue
An ugly though came to her
Twilight averted her eyes as she saw a crouch shout of her black panties
and tugging lightly the tiny baby feathers
I'm actually curious about it's inner mechanics
1. Umm... Why the apostrophe at the end?
2. Thought.
3. Crotch.
4. And tugging lightly at the tiny baby feathers.
5. Its.
Also...
that last line threw me for a real confused loop. Other than that, a fine story. I almost feel that Mac was a little naive at the end but then again, he did notice the magic later.
I actually prefer this rather than your later Fluttershy one but that's preference kicking in. Oh well, you tickled my fetish there and I'll be hoping more comes. Both literal.
Very nice.
A few tiny typos ("its" etc.) listed in comment above could be edited out.
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Thanks for the edits. You just miss some things, you know.
It's missing the 'it'.
Jeeze, I went over this chapter again and again and seeing these kind of mistakes makes me want to get better at catching them. I find it kinda weird that everyone prefers the tentacle one to this one. I didn't think that story with all those fetishes, especially since it was hardcore, would get so much traction.
Between you and me, I like this one the most. But that's because it has re-read value to me.
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Thanks for the praise.