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I'd really like if they implanted the Mane Six with some humiliating yet inescapable fetishes, like the need to be restrained and to obey someone else.

Ooh, maybe they can make Twilight unable to not do whatever Spike tells her for a day, with every command making her more and more horny but also not allowing her an orgasm until Spike gives her one in person!

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It will take a while until it is finished, but I've already something planned with her. :trollestia:

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Great idea, I'll think about it. I won't include Spike in any of the clop-scenes though; I don't feel comfortable writing something like that.

:rainbowhuh::pinkiegasp::facehoof: My thought in order. and it was just kind of meh to me. :pinkiesad2:

Nice, I like the idea of this, there's so many possibilities with it.
Maybe you can do something with Macro/Micro-transformations? Or transformations in general (gender, different animal, inanimate, etc.). Or maybe some paralyzation, maybe use some kind of gas that makes them unable to move at all, even when they're not bound.

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Oh, you can go way meaner than Spike, that's for sure.

Like doing it to Rarity when she's around Prince Blueblood, or Rainbow when she meets the bully trio. Or Twilight doesn't get any relieve at all. Or she has to ask Spike to allow her to get it from some other guy—maybe the first guy she sees! :pinkiecrazy:

The story http://www.fimfiction.net/story/271867/saurasexualicaipposmachia seems to have some uncannily similar features to this one. Are you the same author or otherwise collaborating?

Why did the aliens pump her ass full of miracle gro?:rainbowhuh:
tic tic tic:rainbowlaugh:
I like these aliens sense of humor.

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The author of the other story helped me editing a bit and had access to it prior to release. (even to way more chapters)
He asked me if he could use some of my ideas in his own story.

I don't know why this story has this many dislikes to be honest. It is well written, sorta funny and pretty hot.

I really enjoy these "Have some fetishes just because" stories.

Kind of wondering if the aliens have some master plan or if they're just joyriding perverts corrupting the species of lesser planets for fun.

Haven't read this yet... I'll add it to 'Read Later' for now, but when I do decide to start on it, there better be some weird shit going on.

Nice. I like it, even thought the hinted plot in itself creeps me out. Oh well, I will try to read it with my verpa instead of my mens.

This is interesting so far.
I quite like the brain implants.

Also,
AYY LMAO

chapter 4 , what's gaping?....

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According to the Oxoford Dictionary:

adjective

(Of a hole, wound, etc.) wide open:
there was a gaping hole in the wall

In this chapter it descibes the protagonist's vagina being wide open without anything inside of it. It will be released this friday (it's already finished and just needs to be published).

6129911 oooooh that kind of gaping ok.....

I half-expected AJ to remember dreaming about white owls as a reference to the the movie "The Fourth Kind" :pinkiecrazy:

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I had never heard of that movie before, but I just watched it because of your comment.
To be honest I did expect it to be a bit more about the actual aliens and not just talking about them. :applejackunsure:

Just as a side note: I'll release the fourth chapter in the next 2-3 hours.

Now, how much of that masochistic pleasure was Rarity and how much was induced?

And how much of it stuck? Like, if she trots through Ponyville with her puffy marehood exposed and some stallions gives her rump a smack, will it also arouse her?

I hope they give all of them humiliating, submissive and/or masochistic kinks, just to see whether Equestria can still defend itself when the Elements of Harmony are out of commission due to an inescapable need to do things like exposing themselves to strangers, having their rumps spanked and getting rutted while tightly tied. Now that would be an interesting experiment.

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It's hard to answer your questions without spoilering too much, so you'll have to wait and see. :derpytongue2:

Oh dear, Rarity still has that tail thing!

I have to assume that the ayyliens did something to Twilight's mind to make her so dense? She really should have realized that all that pain (the needles in particular) couldn't have been a dream.

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Twilight should have been smart enough to know that, but her disbelieve in aliens just was stronger. She suppresed the fact that it were aliens so strong she didn't even had the idea to think for another logical explanation (like some crazy ponies abducting her).

About disbelief in aliens it's interesting to look at the Fermi Paradox. I do have an almost scientific explanation why the aliens are there in later chapters though.

Wow, I almost lost track of the timeline and talked about future chapters here!:twilightblush:

I find it interesting that Twilight Sparkle pretty much lost herself to the feelings the aliens induced in her.

Could be that my suspicions from last chapter hit close to home. It would certainly fit.

One of the sexiest chapters yet!

I love how they force Rainbow to love the idea of her friend and other ponies being tortured and abused by the aliens, and Fluttershy to love exposing herself to stallions. It won't take long for Rainbow Dash to wish for something like this to happen to herself, I guess.

It remains to be seen if their depraved and submissive urges will primarily be aimed at the alien experiments or if the experiments include implanting in them a need to seek out stallions to continue the abuse they're being addicted to.

I don't know if anyone cares, but I just had to facehoof because of myself. :facehoof:

Pondering whether 'realised' or 'realized' is more correct and checking several dictionaries while writing on a chapter, I found out I've used 'realised' three times and 'realized' six times (along with other variants of ‘to realize’). So much for continuity :twilightblush:

I went ahead and changed every 'realised' to 'realized'. If you find any other spelling discontinuities or british formulations which are uncommon in american english please let me know. I'm native in neither of those two and don't necessarily realize if I mix something up. My plan is to write this story completely in american english.

(I didn't write this as a blogpost, because I didn't want to annoy anyone with a notification)

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In other words... you used both versions more often than you realiszsed. :trollestia:

Incidentally, these aliens have yet to do anything to Pinkie Pie. I wonder what they can pull with her. Engorge her breasts so they bounce obscenely every time she hops? Condition her to stop bouncing everywhere and instead do a really sensual, slutty strut? Addict her to creamy, creamy stallion "frosting"?

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It was hard for me to find something erotic with Pinkie Pie that wouldn't be terribly OOC, but I had her planned for a later chapter for a while now.

It's not more than two sentences of concept, but I still have something. But now I'm thinking about replacing the actual frosting I had planned with your idea of "frosting". I like that idea. :trollestia:

(It'll take a while until it is published though. I only want to publish one chapter per week)

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Wow! I haven't seen this movie before and I only watched the scene you mentioned just now, but there is a strange similarity to the next chapter (hopefully coming this friday). :rainbowderp:

It's only the eye thing, but still a strange coincidence that this is posted so shortly before I release the chapter. Just as a note: I usually have the contents of a chapter outlined several weeks before it is published.

Here’s the scene for everyone else interested:

Hmmm.

There's a very notable trend of only the females getting restrained. Blindfolds are for both, but the mares are also very likely to be physically tied up, which the aliens demonstrably don't need to do. So, it can't be just for keeping the subjects secured, there has to be a different reason behind it.

The most likely reason at this point is indeed to condition them to enjoy being tied up (Sweetie liked seeing what happened to Cheerilee) as well possibly implanting an attraction towards specific individuals (the colt and Cheerilee). The procedures overall also appear to be much more invasive with females.

Applejack still managed to keep an hold on herself somehow
She couldn't even

1. A.
2. Extra apostrophe.

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Fixed it. Thank you for your input. :pinkiesmile:

And you look a bit.. out of it

1. Just forgot one more full stop to make an ellipses.

Applejack was shocked as all twenty inches of the hose plugging her rear where pulled out with one forceful tug

1. Were.

Behind the giant window where sitting at least

1. Were.

Alien 1 "my these ponies are horny "
"Alien 2 "yes but not as much as that griffin female "
Alien one blinks "there juices will male great fertilizer for our Eggs"


Hehe I'm silly

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I don't find time to write lately. I'm sorry. :applecry:
But it's still not enough for me to set it on hiatus.

:fluttershysad:why futtershy? At least you didn't hurt her :twilightsmile:

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Just wait for the next chapter:trollestia:

The next chapter probably will be here sometime next week. I only have to do two more iterations of editing.

Glad to see this is back, though the tags for next chapter have me worried. Probably going to be another extra messed up one.

If the previous comments were right about the aliens training ponies to pick up fetishes then it looks like Celestia is going to be made a voyeur like Rainbow, get/become an object for pregnancy fetishes, and possibly become a size queen?

Erotic and creepily mystifying as always! Keep up the good work.

Keeping the suspense.... I see...

Very good, very very good :moustache:

Just a short update on the next chapter.

The next chapter won't have any clop in it, so I decided to write a small bonus chapter that has nothing but a clop scene. :trollestia:
That chapter will contain foalcon though. It is entirely optional to read and you won't even notice if you skip it.

I finsihed writing them today, but both the next chapter and the bonus chapter still need a lot of editing to be done. That will take at least one more week, probably two or more. :scootangel:

Edit 2015-11-24: I'm done editing chapter 11 now. All There still is to do before I release it is the bonus chapter. I hope I'll be done with it in the next days.

Wow:rainbowderp:...It was the most disturbing one yet. I really like where this is going.:pinkiecrazy:

I guess Luna really... Lost her mind eh?

You know what they say sometimes; Out of sight, out of mind.

Oh dear, maybe she can hack the spaceship controls whit that form, and the aliens didn't realised of it :rainbowhuh:

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