I am a MLP:FiM fan who lives in Canada. I'm still not completely open about being a brony and the only other person I know in real life who also like MLP:FiM is my sister.
In Equestria Humans are creatures that are things of legends. Stories are passed over the generations about a human that emerged from the forest over 1000 years ago. The human in these stories is an evil creature who prey on innocent ponies. But to the ponies they are just that: stories. No one really believes that story until a human shows up again. The ponies of Equestria are scared of the human but soon some warm up to his presence. After all humans have changed in 1000 years.
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so short..... and when i read this whyy the hell would fluutershy life at the edge of the forest? nice story i could follow it easely
Tracking.
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Awaiting more
Nice beggining but what the hell is wrong with the ending.
So he just falls into unconciousness because the plot calls for it? Ussually characters get hit in the head and get knocked out (for plot conviniance) instead of falling over for no reason.
30855 In the story the human sees a trail of smoke in the distance. Fluttershys home isn`t near the forest it`s just near it.
30869 The explanation to that comes later on in the story
great story so far im tracking this, also i think the character is a brony so i think he fainted when he saw fluttershy i mean i would faint to if i saw one of my favorite ponies
This is interesting. Imma gonna track this
good start mate got me tracking
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Acquire Muffins.
hmmmm....
I wonder how this will turn out???
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
I probably chose the worst time to start my own fanfic. As soon as I put this up I got assigned a bunch of work for my classes. I was hoping to get it out sooner but school was over whelming. I will try harder to get them out faster. And let me know what you think and any advice you want to give would be appreciated.
Good work, but... barbaric yell and and
... THAT HURTS.(No realy i hope you soon upload next part
Ha that last line is gold! Interested In how Alan explains his knowledge of the ponies... Moar!
was screaming NOOOOOO want more
The last 6 words are the 6 most painful words I've ever read
MOAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR
♫♥I ALSO look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
want moar
Da hell, Dash?! You better apologize, and for Alan, he MUST hold a grudge... because that's fucking HURTS!
This story is like chocolate, you eat an entire box and then it's gone :( But I understand schoolwork, so no rush! Looking forward to the next though!
Hoof to crotch? Chances are, according to physics and medical history, Alan won't be having babies. Ever.
That last sentence.
Dear God.
hoof to the crotch=NEVER ON SPEAKING TERMS, EVER! want MOAR!
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Yes.
Ive been kicked in the crotch, with a steel toed boot.
In order, what happened: I sat down, my voice moved up a few notches, i vomited, I vomited again, then I passed out.
I would say Alan would experience something similar.
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Its okay man I probably would've fainted too.
Its okay man I probably would've fainted too.
Also put Doctor Whoves in this story, that would make it perfect.
interesting
so... he was tied to a bed... and then he magicly wasnt?
LOGIC??????
jk i love the story
hope you do good in your classes
Last sentence + Male =
PAIN!
DAFUQ MAN?! WHY WOULD THEY DO THAT TO HIM?!
ok, so now that THAT is out of the system (not rly, no)
MOAR
I...like this concept ya got going here. Def gonna watch this, 5/5 from me! Oh and that last line. Ohhh man, I immediately flinched. Looking forward to more!
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You rang?
ALLONS-Y!
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You better be kidding, because the story explains it.
Was reading la de da de da... then hoof to crotch.
that is my reaction. take yer time with this stuff, greatness rewards the patiant.
Eagerly waiting for more.
hoof to crotch...OUCH.... flutter use the stare on rainbow NOW
WANT MOAR
Man hes got bad luck
CLIFFHANGER?! POST THE NEXT ONE SOON OR I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN
40186 Now I'm scared...
40128 I guess he does
Hopefully I will get the next chapter done soon. I'm getting better balancing school and writing so things will get done sooner. Im looking forward to finishing this
Jesus, give the guy a break why don't ya?
Still, tracking and impatiently waiting for the next chapter
UGH!!!! these chapters are much to short to keep this flowing!!!!
A real cliff hanging vibe that makes me crave MOAR. keep em coming! 
I too liketh not the cliffhanger!
Eyup, aside from being able to go to Equestria, and meeting the awsome ponies, Alan really does seem to be having a really bad day.
... My reaction in that situation?
OH COME ON!!!
"then everything went black"
WTF DID FLUTTERSHY DO??? O.O 
Oh, and tracking.
PRINCESS CELESTIA AND I SHALL WRITE IN YE OLDE TRADITIONAL ROYAL CANTERLOT VOICE!
wow he really can't catch a break can he?
Awesome fic bro! keep it up!
I hope it wouldn't be Tyrant Celestia. If it's one big misunderstanging, it's okay. But if ponies hate humans.. COME ON! Their Nightmare Moon wanted to kill EVERYONE, it's worse that Hitler and Stalin combined! And humans not karnivores, they're omnivores, so Fluttershy, who fed fish to birds, can understand it's natural thing.
Give him a break, really)