• Member Since 10th Dec, 2011
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Gin_the_Fox


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Lan wasn't the happiest kid. With only one friend, a father how is abusive, and a mother that's too over protective to see you don't need a babysitter for a 17 year old. Death isn't kind, untill now. Lan being sent to Equestria for a unknown reason, he can still find that one in a million chance to mess things up. Only the kindness can bring him up as he sets himself for the unwanted and twisted world which follows him.

Chapters (22)
Comments ( 338 )

Little short, but the next one will be longer.

Wow, just wow. I mean I love this. Grammar mistakes here and there, but the plot and story so good, its easy to ignore them. You MUST write the next chapter.

97919i know, she has a mahor part in the story:twilightsmile:

I messed up big time. Need to fix now.:fluttercry:

98350people like you are the reason i like this place

>there fixed, i couldn't sleep last night... damnit

black pegasus with red mane, named nightwing... sounds like a character in this other story i know

99628no idea what your talking about. i just slammed my head into the keyboard and it looked like nightwing

99645...:twilightoops: GIGS UP, HID THE CRACK. ya the only story ive read here is living the dream.

99652 i knew it. hopefully you asked before using him

99658what, dude i didnt steal him. im being dead serious

Ice

I look forward to the rest of this man and if you need a hand with it i'm free most of the time

Ice

Dude you need a pre-reader."I almost forgot, Pinkie is going to through you a party." it should be throw

"Must amazing food ever!" it should be most

Ice

Besides that htough Nice chapter funny also

101014i do need a pre reader :facehoof: oh and fixed

Ice

101027 I'm up for it if you want.

Lan Jenkins?Is he related to LEEROOYYYYY JENNNNKINS!!?!?!?

101076DAMN STRAIGHT. while thinking of ideas, i was watching good grief and they did a thing where one dude was being him. so i just did it

101029that would be wonderful! :twilightsmile: ill give you the pass.

so.....JIN when were u gonna give me the link:trixieshiftright::trixieshiftright:

102093FUCK OFF DAMNIT, GOD DAMNIT. ITS GIN!!! GIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!! (throws chair out of window) but no seriously what link?

Ice

shit just hit da fan

103049what fan? also i have this amazing idea that came in a dream. It might be in the story if i can fix it up. also don't read princess molestia. that shit gets fucked up fast

lol best villain ever!:rainbowlaugh:

104128where have i heard your name before...:rainbowhuh:

102221 i told u GIN (:twilightsheepish:) to send me a link but oh well good storyso far :pinkiehappy:

i can really tell u wrote this GIN it has.......................................ur touch *no sexual pun intended*:moustache:

104226 idk. the only story ive been in is 'why me?' by ice, so if youve read that you may recognize me. but other than that, i havent been in anything

104275your with kickass... i did a bit of research :pinkiehappy:

104408 yeah i noticed you read living the dream, so i was thinking you mustve seen me in the comments, since im not in the actual story

104427problem solved:pinkiehappy: also thanks for readind:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

eye twitch activated

Ouch, that's deep Twilight.

109518just you wait. just. you. wait. :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

110856irony? :rainbowhuh:. im going to start writing the next one now. might clear some things up. also i am PISSED. minecraft, what can you expect. :facehoof:. so ya

:trixieshiftright:so.........thats how i die good work capturing my attitude and pairing me with aj

Excellent story so far bro!

111320master chief pegasus approves? my face :pinkiegasp:

111351D: i come back on to see this??????? at least tell me why????

looks like im a bigger part of this story than i thought:pinkiehappy: i cant wait to see what happens next:pinkiecrazy:

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