Lan wasn't the happiest kid. With only one friend, a father how is abusive, and a mother that's too over protective to see you don't need a babysitter for a 17 year old. Death isn't kind, untill now. Lan being sent to Equestria for a unknown reason, he can still find that one in a million chance to mess things up. Only the kindness can bring him up as he sets himself for the unwanted and twisted world which follows him.
Little short, but the next one will be longer.
Wow, just wow. I mean I love this. Grammar mistakes here and there, but the plot and story so good, its easy to ignore them. You MUST write the next chapter.
97667 achievement unlocked
Random Gilda is random
97919i know, she has a mahor part in the story
I messed up big time. Need to fix now.
98350people like you are the reason i like this place
>there fixed, i couldn't sleep last night... damnit
tacos? what?
black pegasus with red mane, named nightwing... sounds like a character in this other story i know
99628no idea what your talking about. i just slammed my head into the keyboard and it looked like nightwing
99640 im sure you did
99645... GIGS UP, HID THE CRACK. ya the only story ive read here is living the dream.
99652 i knew it. hopefully you asked before using him
Fuck yeah.
99658what, dude i didnt steal him. im being dead serious
99672 i believe you
I look forward to the rest of this man and if you need a hand with it i'm free most of the time
9982thanks
Dude you need a pre-reader."I almost forgot, Pinkie is going to through you a party." it should be throw
"Must amazing food ever!" it should be most
Besides that htough Nice chapter funny also
101014i do need a pre reader oh and fixed
101027 I'm up for it if you want.
Lan Jenkins?Is he related to LEEROOYYYYY JENNNNKINS!!?!?!?
101076DAMN STRAIGHT. while thinking of ideas, i was watching good grief and they did a thing where one dude was being him. so i just did it
101029that would be wonderful! ill give you the pass.
so.....JIN when were u gonna give me the link
102093FUCK OFF DAMNIT, GOD DAMNIT. ITS GIN!!! GIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN!!!!! (throws chair out of window) but no seriously what link?
shit just hit da fan
103049what fan? also i have this amazing idea that came in a dream. It might be in the story if i can fix it up. also don't read princess molestia. that shit gets fucked up fast
lol best villain ever!
104128where have i heard your name before...
102221 i told u GIN () to send me a link but oh well good storyso far
i can really tell u wrote this GIN it has.......................................ur touch *no sexual pun intended*
104266what do you mean?
104226 idk. the only story ive been in is 'why me?' by ice, so if youve read that you may recognize me. but other than that, i havent been in anything
104275your with kickass... i did a bit of research
104408 yeah i noticed you read living the dream, so i was thinking you mustve seen me in the comments, since im not in the actual story
104427problem solved also thanks for readind
eye twitch activated
Ouch, that's deep Twilight.
109518just you wait. just. you. wait.
Lol.Irony.
110856irony? . im going to start writing the next one now. might clear some things up. also i am PISSED. minecraft, what can you expect. . so ya
so.........thats how i die good work capturing my attitude and pairing me with aj
Excellent story so far bro!
111320master chief pegasus approves? my face
I hate you
111351D: i come back on to see this??????? at least tell me why????
looks like im a bigger part of this story than i thought i cant wait to see what happens next