The Reception
Ponyville: Twilight's Treehouse
Celestia has set the sun for the day and Twilight is carrying an unconscious Goku as he has been exhausted from the events of the day. "Spike, Goku's going to be staying here tonight so he can meet the Princess bright and early tomorrow."
The purple dragon, already preparing the guest room, looks to see the giant red ape his sister levitated in. "That doesn't look like Goku to me. Wasn't he shorter when I met him earlier?" Spike points out as he looks at the sleeping saiyan in confusion.
"Your guess is as good as mine, Spike. When the moon rose, he just changed into this. Maybe we'll be able to get an explanation tomorrow." Twilight then proceeds to take Goku upstairs to his quarters for the evening. "All I do know is he's hard a tough day and, like anypony else, he needs his rest." She then put him on the bed in a fetal position so he can fit without any of his limbs dangling off the sides. "I really hope somepony can explain this. This is like the Pinkie Sense all over again." The mare goes to her own room for the night as she continues to rack her brain over the saiyan.
Canterlot Castle: Celestia's Quarters
"Dear sister, dost thou sense this immense energy as well as us?" A blue alicorn exclaims in panic as she barges into the room.
"Yes Luna, I do. But what does this mean? In all my life I have never felt a force as strong as this. Yet in spite of this immense power, I don't feel the slightest bit of hostility in it." The white alicorn also expresses her concern as she tries to rationalize it. "All we have to go on is this letter my student sent me earlier this morning. I have told her that I would investigate the matter first thing tomorrow."
Dear Princess Celestia,
This morning it was scheduled by the pegasi that it would be a clear sunny day. Yet a dark, spiral of stormclouds seemed to spawn over the Everfree Forest and expand over Ponyville. These clouds were accompanied by a golden glow in the center followed by what sounded like a dragon's roar. After a few seconds, the golden glow concentrated itself and crashed into the forest's center. Not too long after, the same golden glow then formed itself into what I counted to be seven orbs that spun around in a circle and split themselves apart in different directions. The dark clouds quickly dissipated after the orbs had split. I am submitting this letter to you for this is something I, nor anypony have ever seen before and hope that you would aid us in figuring out this situation.
Your faithful student, Twilight Sparkle
"Dark clouds, golden glow, and seven orbs." Celestia thinks to herself as she tries to put all the pieces together. "Perhaps it has to do with that energy as well. I might be able to figure it out when I get to Ponyville tomorrow. For now I must rest. Good night Luna." The sun alicorn lays herself to rest as she gestures a shoo to Luna.
The Next Morning-Ponyville: Twilight's Treehouse
*yawn* "Where am I?" Goku gets out of bed as he looks out the window of his room to see the sun risen once again. He walks downstairs to see Twilight and Spike talking to their ruler, Princess Celestia. "Morning Twilight, Spike, and... who's the taller, white horse?" He asks as he gestures toward Celestia.
Twilight immediately reprimands the saiyan with a quick whisper. "She's not a horse. She's an alicorn and our ruler at that. Also, I meant to ask you last night. What happened? When the sun set and the moon rose, you suddenly grew turning into what you are now."
Goku then looks at himself in the mirror to find he is in his Super Saiyan 4 state. "I guess I went Super Saiyan 4 instead of turning into a giant ape. Well how about that." He then proceeds to undo the transformation right before their eyes. "There we go."
The unicorn then directs herself to her teacher. "Princess Celestia, this is who I was talking about. This is Goku."
Celestia directs herself to Goku, giving him a look that seemed to peer into his soul. "As my student must have told you before, I am Princess Celestia, ruler of this nation Equestria. It's a pleasure to meet you Goku."
Goku, never knowing the appropriate etiquette for meeting royalty, nonchalantly addresses the princess. "Twilight said that you raised and set the sun. I was under the impression you were a god or something."
The alicorn, always quick with a response, answers the saiyan's inquiry while giving one of her own. "They praise me like one I guess, but I actually do raise and set the sun. It's a special type of magic only I can and must do. So Goku, Twilight told me about what happened yesterday. Do you think you could tell us what happened?"
"Sure. It's a long story though. You might wanna take a seat." Goku states as waits for them to be seated before proceeding to tell them his epic tale.
"It all started with these magical balls called the dragonballs. There are seven in total. When you bring all of them together, you can summon the eternal dragon to grant one wish. Well it used to be one wish, but that's another story. Anyway, we got ourselves into trouble a lot with the fate of our planet and sometimes the whole universe at stake. So every time trouble came, we would use the dragonballs to bring back all the innocent people that would die. What we didn't know was that when we used the dragonballs, they would fill up with negative energy each time. Eventually, they cracked from the pressure and the shadow dragons came. They reeked havoc all over the planet and it was up to me to defeat them. After I defeated Omega Shenron, the dragonballs were pure again and the original dragon, Shenron, came out of the dragonballs without a summon. He said that he needed to take the dragonballs away from the Earth so they wouldn't have to rely on them or me anymore and I went with him knowing they'd be in good hands. Next thing I know, I'm here and the dragonballs are split again like they used to except this time there's no dragon radar to find them."
After taking their time to soak in everything he said, Celestia walks up to Goku. "Wow. I... I don't know what to say. I am truly astonished. I was looking into your memories the whole time. I apologize, but I felt obligated to because I feared that with your immense power, you would be a threat to my little ponies. But now I see I couldn't be further from the truth. Your life and everything that happened in it. You literally went to hell and back for the sake of others." Celestia then hangs her head down in shame only to lift it up in determination. "You need not worry Goku. We'll help you find the dragonballs. We'll-"
Goku stops the princess before she can continue. "No. If I've learned anything it's that the dragonballs shouldn't be used so much. We shouldn't need them. If someone happens to find all seven on their own then it's ok, but there's no magic in something if it's only a means to an end. Let someone find them eventually. They'll be spread all over the planet not to be used again for a long time."
"Very well. But what of this Shenron? He brought you here did he not? Since you're so far away from home, what exactly do you intend to do from now on?" Celestia looks to Goku with curiosity.
The saiyan, unable to come up with anything, gives his honest response. "I'll just hang around Ponyville I guess. I already made some great friends here and I don't think I'd be comfortable anywhere else."
DBZ Universe: Hell
"We learned our lesson last time yes Doctor Myu?"
"Yes Doctor Gero. We didn't have enough manpower last time. That is why we are getting the assistance of all who have fallen at his hand. Muahahahahahaha!"
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"I never sensed a power like this before" - Goku
I can sense a fight coming, let the Ki explosions begin!
Wait, if he will saty, does that mean he will......
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I mean, they just saw a little monkey thing turn into a big red ape thing in the span of a few minutes, plus he's and alien... atleast in thier case, shouldn't thier reaction be a little less calm and a bit more over the top?
655646 I had honestly forgot to decide whether or not he would be transformed when meeting Celestia so I ultimately forgot to put in a reaction as well. It's now edited
Well, I'm glad you tried to resolve it. But it just seems like your brushing past the issue, the way they react at seeing the change, it's like they've seen a Super Saiyan 4 on a weekly basis, and Goku has NEVER turned Super Saiyan 4 against his will before so shouldn't he act a little surprised and THEN figure out how it happened?
To be honest, I just don't think your giving some of the things in this fic, this being the most in need of pointing out so far, enough depth or emotion to them, the whole thing just seems to get through everything as fast as possible just to get to the next thing. And, to be honest, that a BAD thing.
658206 The pace the story went in so far was intended. I needed to introduce Goku to Equestria so everything can be explained in finer detail as well as helping reinforce things already and yet to be established.
That's fair enough, but you stiil need to find a balance. I would suggest looking back and see what thing need a quick paced solution, and which should be more fleshed.
You don't have to but thats my opinion.
he's hard a tough day
how do you know he is hard
Well...did not expect that. Nice chapter! I did then have a little bit of doubt when seeing that the plot was going so freaking fast, but now that I think about it, that's kinds how stuff went at DB in general. Besides, Goku's nonchalant reaction with ANYTHING pretty much disolves any other long, drama filled plot
. Anyway, let the explosions begin, and by they way, I do agree that you could find a bit more of balance. But if you do intend to make it more...filled, for lack of a better word, later on, then I have nothing to say
. See ya on the next chapter!
Hmmm... Discord, whose power level is as strong as Nova Shenron vs. Goku, who in his base form alone, might have a power level of between 500 billion and 1 trillion, so Goku in his Super Saiyan 4 form could have a power level in the quadrillions?
...
I think that would be fun. It would be like Broly had came to Earth and Vegeta decided to slap Broly around. It would be awesome.
Also, just the title alone makes me want to do the "Step into the Grand Tour" song, only alter the details so that it has some pony terms and stuff in it.
I always saw Discord as the MLP version of Cell.
823921 In his base form?
838941 So, if he were Super Saiyan 4, would his power level be 500 billion or 200 trillion? 'cause i tend to think that Super Saiyan 4 continues after Super Saiyan 3, not just super saiyan, which 400 (50 x 2 x 4) times 500 (50x10-SSj4 is the great ape version of a super saiyan) is 200,000.
851497 That would be exciting to watch.
915071 That's a nice pic. Well, have a nice day.
Has this been cancelled or something?
Has this been cancelled or are you just lazy? No offense meant, it's just that this story hasn't updates in MONTHS. I was kinda hoping for more DBZ awesomeness.
1323422 I'm still working on it. Thing is though I, and some other readers, found my writing a little too fast-paced, so I'm taking my time to read other fics so I could learn how to write in a different style than the one i currently employ. I'm working on it through research.
1325954Like 4 months of research? Just seems a bit too much. Anyways, I like the concept, hate the waiting. Same with all fics I have read before.
1326001 The time is almost right just keep waiting a little more. I'm almost done. It takes a while to redo an entire writing style
1326026I guess. One more suggestion before you start writing? No text walls. I, as well as many many other readers, HATE text walls. You need to space out the texts, and probably start a new line whenever someone else starts to talk.
1326051 I did that when I first started writing and did my best to avoid it. If I ever catch myself with that or am caught with that it will be immediately edited.
1326079Alright, good to hear.
GIVE US MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh buck, Goku's enemies are going to invade Equestria and Goku's the only one with a chance in a fight against those guys!
On the plus side, however, all the enemies who Goku didn't have a rematch with in GT are going to be totally caught off guard by his Super Saiyan 4 power!
Can't wait for him to show the Equestrians how badflank he is!
Wait, I got a question: In GT, Dr. Myuu betrayed Dr. Gero, so why is Dr. Gero teaming up with Dr. Myuu? Not criticizing, just asking.
1654822 Scientists learn from trial and error like everyone else don't they?
1655770 Oh. Sorry for sounding rude. Please forgive me.
Congratz, I've deemed your story worthy of being in the Equestrian Saiyans main folder!
MOAR!!!!
cant wait for the next chapter
and make it about 20% cooler
MOAR !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
1655770 more MORE MORE
2621930
as a bonus
Yes I also demand MORE.
As some incentive I will give you a
Power Levels Dragon Ball GT MLP Saga:
Son Goku 1,150,000,000,000
Twilight Sparkle 1,600
Rainbow Dash 75
Spike 1.5
Applejack 80
Pinkie Pie 40
Fluttershy (Timed) 20
Princess Celestia 100,000,000
Princess Luna 95,000,000
Goku SSJ4 869,400,000,000,000
an more
This Fic. Is Dead =?¿=
2678073
Dude. Pinkie can't have a low rating. Breaking the fourth wall is not something for the weak. Also, defying physics. She'd be up there.
2678073 It's more like ssj4 goku's power level = Yes.
i hope you one day continue
4790132 Unless one of the "threats" does a Cell and does a planet destroying kamikaze.
More please
Oh, this hurts!
For starters, the full moon wouldn't turn him into a SS4, it probably won't even have an effect on him anymore. Even if that were the case, he'd have to be looking directly at the moon in order for anything to happen.
I interpreted this as 'GET THE F**K OUT, I'M TRYING TO SLEEP!'
5910318 oh god how are the ponies going react when they figure out that he transform in a full moon and has other transformations
6087452 in this chap he said instead of the great ape he turned into super saiyan four
3618825 True. She should be above Twilight at least.