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Is the surprise a penis?
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Have you read it yet?
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Unfortunately, yes.
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Unfortunately..... don't you mean fortunately? XD
This... kind of goes beyond crackfic. I have to imagine that the writing is deliberately bad as well, to add to the effect?
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What are talking about? This isn't a crackfic.... its... I dunno.
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Nope, I'm afraid not. This is ten minutes of my life that I regret wasting and that I shall never have back.
I feel like this needs to be broken up into about 20 50-word chapters.
Just a note for anyone reading this.... I did not add this to the TwiDash group. Feel free to remove it.
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No... just sick with cold. Maybe the pills (to cure the cold) I took made me a little crazy.
5985470 penis was said 49 times in this story.
1: Twilight should leave Rainbow cause she wants a dick.
2: I don't like South Park but Twilight saying that "in this Universe all us sexy ponies' have a Mr Garrison fetish Please stick your penis in us", that should be Pinkie's job. Also you need a period for Mr. and a period after Garrison in the paragraph.
3: Lack of paragraphs almost made me vomit.
4: Lack of detail of whatever the fuck is going on. WHY DA PONIES KISS WHEN WE START THE STORY? YOU NEED A FUCKING BACKGROUND TO DO THAT! Aside from vagina and dick.
Talk about one hell of a wreck. I don't think I've read something that made me cringe this much for some time now.
I do agree with what Lord of Hentai is saying, there does seem to be a kind of South Park-esque kind of vibe while reading this, which isn't too bad considering, and that the ending could've been...more. With that said, not too bad of a fic (I've read far worse ones by now), granted I won't be giving this a fav or a thumbs up; but, hey, at least I'm not gonna add to the thumbs down count either.
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Well, I thought it was funny. Yeah, the story is completely stupid, but it's kinda supposed to be stupid.
But yeah, I should probably have come up with a better ending.
Thanks for not downvoting it.
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Originally that was plan. But I was worried it would get to meta for this site.
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I can't guarantee I will, if I'm drunk one night something like this may rise again.
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2. Mr only needs a . if in American English. Everywhere else it is fine without, because "mister" and "Mr" end in the same letter.
5986824 Eh, well I use American English.
okay...this is even more absurd than your usual random stuff
and my frail mind can't stand the picture of omnipresent dicks, it seems
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I myself can't really picture the dicks.
Did you enjoy the story?
5988692 Idk, futa is not really my thing
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Ah, OK.
This was horrible. The writing was so bad, I laughed. I couldn't even cringe. I don't know what to say or how to feel.