Scroll of an Old Age
Hello there.
If you are reading this, then you must be one of the survivors or you're one of... Them.
No matter who you are, it does not matter. For the days before the portal are long gone.
Who am I? you are thinking about that right now aren't you?
Well my name is... Well I guess that's not important now because they rule this world now, are they not?
Now the next thing in your mind of question is 'What about the portal' right?
Well you see, if you're one of the survivors then it is me and the teams undoing of our world. But if you are one of Them. Then it was your ticket to our destruction wasn't it?
But you're now wondering how this was my fault and the teams that created the portal. And for that answer we'll have to go back to when it was created and where we found them.
Eight years ago. We were in the golden age of our people. Teleportation can be created by machines and medication grew so large that if you lost a limb, you can grow it back by minutes and made you feel five time more stronger. But the teleportation was the one that made this golden age happen. The thought of going to the moon and back was made true, getting to one side of the world to another a reality and to make a surprise party in seconds by making all you friends and family come in a flash was incredible. If you could see it... heh it was unbelievably beautiful and remarkable. But we wanted more and more. The cost of greatness was in our grasp and it was so close. We thought of expanding into the unknown stars and maybe land on a new planet with life to create a utopia for the ages of histories.
But we never thought of the consequences and the price of expanding. We never thought of what could be out there that we thought we were the only life in existence... I never thought about it because I wanted to be the first to discover new life and a new world to live on, my stupid pride and the prides of my teams cost all of... This.
We began that project. We called it 'New Beginning' where we tried to improve teleportation by expanding it length of travel by twenty-five thousand light years from our planet. At first it was going well, until we'd found out that those who used this new teleportation cannot return. So we had to think outside of the box and make something new from it.
It was my foolish idea to create from the idea of the teleportation to a way of making a connection with our planet with another. We first find a planet then we connected it with ours.
We used it on our moon first as beta test, to make sure that nothing bad happens...
But it was an success in the end.
We managed to create a portal from our world to our moon.
Our golden age just got brighter and our future got greater.
We named this new portal transport 'The Golden Way', where we can go through places beyond the stars. Where we can see the whole universe in its remarkable beauty and glory.
But once again we never thought of the consequences and the price of expanding. I should of realise that this portal transport was no good for our people and would doom us in the end.
But my pride and loving of my fame made me continue project 'New Beginning'.
I should have left it as it is and not expand beyond our own knowledge of this universe. I should of.
With the portal transport ready and prepared. We began to see if there were other planets for us to travel to, perhaps even living on them or even meeting new life beyond our own.
We also made a system where we can either open a portal as a door or a window, so we can see what lays beyond the portal. You know, to make sure what was over there wouldn't hurt us.
We should have thought of that with their planet!
We found hundred of planets. But none hold life on them and cannot contain us to live on. We may had been in our golden age, but to create life on an unknown planet was impossible.
Even with their grand powers.
But soon we found their planet.
If you're one of them. Then this is where you come in.
Almost like ours, maybe even the same without us in it.
Blue ocean waters and green, white, yellow and brown lands.
We opened the portal and set it on window standby.
We SHOULD of kept it like that.
Even when we saw the evidence of their kind.
Strange biped creatures that are way taller then us, somewhere around five foot more then us. Not a lot of hair on them nor had tails.
But it wan't their physical form that we gasped in horror about.
It's what they did on their own planet and own race that made us gasped in horror.
They fought against each other. Murdering thousands if not millions of their people for land, supplies, territories and even their gods. They killed their people for sometime no reason at all only for entrainments and pleasure.
We watched this from the portal and we were disgusted by their actions. Some of my teams either threw up or ran from the portal crying the tears out with dread.
We SHOULD of kept it like that.
But it seems that even I didn't think about that and went to a insane idea for them.
We had many meetings with princess Celestia, Luna, Cadence and Twilight and told them about the creatures we found.
Their hearts were in the right place and wanted to help them.
But even then I had a small feeling that it wasn't going to be easy and peacefully. If we didn't play our cards right, we could make their race worse or more.
You can see how that turned out if you're one of the survivors. A blessing if you're one of them.
We first began slow and steady by looking at their history and background.
Our hopes for a peaceful way of making them stop fighting each other ended when we read their histories:
War.
Conflicts.
Empires.
These words and more were all over every history books on their planet and nothing has change from them.
Just wars.
Religious wars.
Civil wars.
And World wars.
Wars after wars and empire after empire.
There was no peace between their race that can stop their bloodlust, greed, wars and conquests.
Once again it was me that made an idea.
An idea I've regret for years.
This idea was called:
'Conversion of Hope'
If you're one of them. Then this was lie and a 'inhuman' act from us.
If you're one of the survivors. Then I am truly sorry.
This idea was promoted by the royals to help them from their lust for violence.
By converting them into us. Destroying their evil nature and turing them into peaceful and loving ponies.
We then switched the portal from window...
To door.
And we went to the war lust planet that they live on.
I am so sorry on our behalf, not only on my people side but on your behalf.
We shouldn't mess with nature and more important....
You.
We made a potion that contain each powers of the royals.
Which was the sun, moon, love and friendship.
It was a prefect plan on papers.
But was a doomed plan in action.
At first we used the potion on small villages and towns that were far from huge cities.
The process of convert was a painful one.
Not only their physical form.
But by mental as well.
We wanted to get their violence nature out of their minds by changing it to our way of life. So they can join us in our golden age.
We did expect some resistance from them.
You know the... 'We are what we are' saying to us.
But we never thought that they would bring an army to come from all corners of their world.
That right.
One hundred and ninety-six of their nations came charging towards us.
All of them attacking and killing us for not losing their violence, bloodlust wars.
They turned their weapons on us.
Weapons that destroyed ours like it was made of papers.
They had flying metal machines that bombed us and blew us up.
They had walking mechanical monsters that blew up our defensives like sand.
We were getting destroyed by them.
We had to abandon the project and run to the portal to escape the bloodshed.
But you didn't stop there, didn't you?
You fought together and you wanted justice from our actions.
You came for us.
you chased us.
From all corners of your world.
Until you found our portal.
Your tickets to your crusade.
Your wondering why we didn't close the portal?
Well all great devises has their weakness.
And the portal's one...
Was that there were no turn off switch.
We didn't thought about that!
I didn't thought about that.
You continue your fight on your planet until you found the portal.
Not give us any chances...
You brought your armies through the portal.
And all out war made Equestria and her allies drowned in blood.
Your technology was more advance then ours.
Your soldiers were more trained in the act of war.
We didn't stand a chance.
We never stand a chance.
City after city, soldier after soldier and soul after soul.
You came and destroyed my people's lives and dreams.
Not even the might of the royal couldn't stopped your warlike nature.
For nine years the war we called 'The Conversion War' raged and roared throughout our world.
Until our last stand at our capital, Canterlot...
Fell to your blitz.
Soon our world was at your mercy.
But you didn't stop there, oh no.
You continued your bloodshed on us...
By using our own potion against us.
You unconverted your people back to their original form.
The mind of your people was saved. But they had a lust for our blood that even your race saw it as something else.
But they were the first to be known as...
"Pony Hunters"
Where they travel the lands of our world to hunt us down one by one.
And bring us to our fallen capital.
To be converted.
Into your race.
A taste of our own medicines.
Over one whole year, those hunters found most of my race and turned them into you.
I was one of the few survivors to escaped and hide in few locations where your people could not find us.
But to look at the whole project of the Conversion of Hope.
Was somewhat a success.
We stopped you from fighting each other.
But you turned your wars on us and stole all of our technologies to make more portals for your wars. Our medications to make your soldiers almost impossible to be killed.
Our golden age was destroyed and our future belongs to your race now.
Now I must ask you a favour.
Because you had found me hanging myself near where you found this scroll.
If your one of them, then you can burn this scroll for it means nothing to your race.
But if you are one of the survivors then keep this scroll and-
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Oh how I wish humanity was united like that. Maybe in the future, once nations stop fighting each other.
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"Humanity will not stop fighting. It is in their nature. But one day, they'll fight something not them and all will live as brothers"- Anonymous, 1987-2001
MOAR PLS!!! Seriously, man, you should write some stories about the Conversion War.
5966085 This story or something new?
A nitpick about your summary:
it should be 'we didn't stand a chance' instead of 'we didn't stood a chance'.
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Yep, events of this story.
This was absolutely brilliant. Not only was the writing good (in my opinion), but I got hooked in from the beginning, and thought that the narrator was a human at first, and they found an even more war-like race. Then I wondered 'when did the humans meet the ponies?' Then, when the narrator mentions 'turning them into ponies,' I realized that this is from a pony's POV instead of a human. Then, while I was shocked, by both the 'plot-twist' and the 'inhumane' actions of the ponies, I kept on reading. But absolutely great story writer.
Also, I always like seeing humanity unite under a single banner. Whether it's fighting aliens or something else, I just love seeing the capabilities of a fully united Earth.
Also, the pony's actions are despicable.
But great story.
trying to write my own take on Human Equine war, only the ponies succeeds and keep converting planet after planet, using the Multiverse theory here, until they get to mine, where whole armies are trained in days, and it's impossibly huge numbers of ponies, versus Video Game trained G.E.A.R. soldiers, with some guns and armor from various games. Bring it sunbutt.
5965675 true, bring yo guns E.T.
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Just looked at the dislikes on my story.
COME AT US CONVERT PONIES SCUMS!
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COME AND FACE THE MIGHT OF A UNITED PEOPLE OF WAR!!
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How would this 'armies trained in days' thing happen?
5966616 you're too kind
future tech basically, a company called NERVGEAR creatse a VR headset and entire worlds, five years later, surpassing their earlier achievement, their create a device that works in reverse, taking the actions you do in the game, and convert them into muscle memory. efficiently creating a way to convert gamers into knights, pilots, tank operators, soldiers, anything really. then the ponies attack, GEAR creates a PMC, not a Para-Military Company but a Pony Murdering Corp. mainly because the worlds nations find that the trade off for instinct based soldiers are a lack of discipline that you would find in a regular army. so GEAR was formed, the Gamers Elite Assault Regimen Hey gamers still got style, and they start fighting to reclaim the lost countries, before fighting several universes that the ponies have already converted, Eventually we'll see if gamers are better then the best Celestia can throw at them.
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5969354 Is this one of those TCB stories?
It was okay. It relies a little too much on the "humans are absolutely bloodthirsty once provoked" trope that I roll my eyes at and has many grammatical errors. Otherwise, fun.
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The wrath of humanity is like wildfire : the more you try to extinguish it the stronger it gets
5976519 Don't mess with fire if you want to get burned.
21 like and 12 dislikes
Let's try and keep it like that or grown the like even higher
Yup.
I am going out and say that i found it over the top that they look at war and gasp in horror that we are nothing than blood thirsty monsters. They're is always conflict, but there is also peace.
Also, these ponies.. seem kind of dense. No off switch? Seriously?
Yeah, good write though.
5971610 what it's the truth if someone suddenly punches you you won't ask a reason why you just hit back (don't lie)
That's why you don't go into someone else's yard and crash their party without an invitation and you don't go changing that someone's pecking order around either. It never ends well.
Im not sure how I feel about this...... Sure humans won the battle(its obvious that unless you really wanna be a dumbass the humans will win no matter what)
But the whole were on!y bloodthirsty savages part isn't really right..
Look at the U.N for example those guys are all about keeping the peace and their like one of the largest group of countries ever... (Right?)
6056283 Personally I think that we'd have mixed opinions. Some of us would want to simply unconvert all those who had been ponyfied and then force all Equetrian influence back out through the portal and then stop after we had kept them out on their side of the portal. Others would want to take the fight to them in the way shown here. Either way there'd be some form of bloodshed that we would bring down.
6020149 If someone hits you randomly for no reason what so ever, then yes who wouldnt hit back first? they obviously dont want to talk and will probably keep hitting you
6223767 thank you that was nice of you to show those bad things
I dont like how you portray humanity as plain demons, sure our history is upp and down but not justo down
6397794 we have thing for retribution. And when you mind-rape a number of our citizens, well, we're not especially happy about that.
Alright, we've established that turning humans into ponies is a mind rape, but is turning a pony into a human?
5965618 but if we were united we wouldn't have so many wonderful things like - the INTERNET!!!
Thanks, Obama.
Yay death to ponys
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6397794 Remember, this is from a pony's point of view... ya know, those little critters that have been brainwashed by a society with the same sole ruler for over a thousand years
I'm guessing we humans decided "what if there are more monsters out on other worlds?" and we decided to go monster hunting throughout the cosmos and many universes. To walk the Blind Eternities destroying all that is evil so that which is good may flourish.
To the ponies:
Land = survival
Supplies = survival
Territory = survival
gods = the best way to survive and therefore not killing people who resist it means that those people will cause countless others to suffer and die who would have otherwise been saved (lives or souls). At least, that is what was/is believed.
It is ironic that the only wars fought for something other than survival are because the fighters believe they are saving or protecting either the people they are killing or many more than would die in the war.