Written on a phone!? Well done! I have trouble commenting with a phone.

I am Like number 2.

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Since I have a Droid, I have a decent word processor, so it's not all bad. Mostly just a pain without a keyboard. Thanks for the like! I see a lot of negative reactions already, especially compared to my first work, and I'm honestly not surprised. I can imagine this material would be controversial.

It was good until the part were Starlight grew a dick :(

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It's not a real dick. Just a magical strap-on.

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It wasn't bad for a clopfic, but it needed a bit more time and buildup to be really good.

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Right. I forget that many heterosexual males aren't into prostate stimulation/pegging. I'll be sure to mark that in my warning. Thanks for the feedback.

hmm,,,, I am okay with this

This story might be a sequel.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/259586/2/vindication/chapter-1-double-diamond

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Equal sign cutie mark.