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kingtiger666


I'm rather clever.

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Prince Blueblood. Haughty aristocrat and heir to the throne of Canterlot.
Big Macintosh. Simple farmpony with a love for apples.
They're in love.
Wait, what?



This is M/M. Colt cuddlers. Queers. Buttpirates. Fudgepackers. By all means, fill the comments with badly typed anti-gay rants, I'm not gonna stop you, in fact I quite enjoy it. You see, I bathe in your hatred. It really helps my complexion.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 22 )

I'm tempted to read, especially since it's not tagged for sex. Hmm. Shall I?

2630869 Yes. Yes you shall.

You bathe in hatred? How quaint... So do I. Though I bathe in something closer to massacres.

Tastes in bath asides, this is quite good.

So far, the characters' interactions flow naturally and that's always a plus. I'm interested in seeing more.

It's true. MacIntosh is a bit thick at times, else the fact that his sister correctly guessed the gender of his love interest would probably have given him pause.

well, at least I'm not the only one that thought Bluey was a closet case. Mac is the perceived gay guy for the fandom.

*Grins* cute start. Only typo I saw that really jumped out at me was palte rather than plate.

*Grins* very enjoyable so far. continue please:twilightsmile:

Even with the explanation of bad behavior, Big Mac and BLUEBLOOD:pinkiesick:

This story has been wonderfully amusing to me. I like your sense of humor, both in interactions between the characters, Bluebloods general behavior in wanting to keep up appearances as well as the humorous lines of exposition or commentary throughout your chapters. I'll be looking forward to next chapters.

Lips locked, and Macintosh’s eyes opened. It was painfully cliche, like Sleeping Beauty but gayer and with ponies, but that’s what happened. And it was wonderful.

I think that sums up this whole, glorious story.

Well, I gotta say I've not seen to many stories shipping Blueblood with other ponies, that ended well anyway. This one was sweet and really nice. Nice job King, I'm really glad I read this.

You earn :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: out of five

Congrats :pinkiehappy:

Thank you for giving us a nice Blueblood X BigMac story.

So.... Awesome..... :rainbowkiss::yay:

A short while later, the two found their plates empty (Come up with better wording for this.)

.

Uh...you may have missed an editing bit here....

Weird but cute. No screwups that I spotted, just a cute fun fic.

We enter to Canterlot Station

...wat?

They kept ponies way with a

:trixieshiftright:

what some may like you to believe about farm ponies

,

Want

She gave him the usual reply.

Remove

Here’s hopin’ Ah can even find mah seat.

Remove

it was about half a minute long down an empty corridor.

Remove

and after a minute the bemustached pony sighed,

:ajsleepy:

“Pass my that trunk,

>~>

“Ah wouldn’t tell a soul.”

Won't

Anyway, they’re in the dining car now.

Stop changing tenses you, that's annoying.

It was hardly what one would term haute cuisine

Put this in parentheses.

he’ll tell the tabloids and the my reputation will be ruined--

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Wait a moment... why am I going through and editing this? Not like you're going to actually fix it....

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We enter to Canterlot Station

Basic film terminology, which I thought it was a bit funny at the time.

and after a minute the bemustached pony sighed,

That's what passes for a joke around here, actually.

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Anyway, they’re in the dining car now.

Again, the joke is that I didn't want to write about their walk through the train, so I used my Magic Writer Powers (TM) to teleport them there.

Put this in parentheses.

I don't see why. Explain.

Hey now, why the ragequit? Is it because of the beavers? No, wait-- my psychic powers are detecting high levels of apathy- You think I don't really care, don't you? Well I'll yell ya somethin mistah, Ah care a hootn a pootato field bout this here story, so yall best get comin on back here with yer fancy cityfolk grammars and word books n such. Now tally on back ya rattlesnakeskin olive tree!

awesome author note at the end lol. :trollestia::moustache::rainbowlaugh:

awesome story but... just... applebloom :facehoof:

“I am Mephistopheles.
Great are the works of your Lord,
But greater still are those of mine.
For this world is wicked.
It is cruel and vain, giving no alms to the weak or lame.
Does your Lord, Creator of All, allow such things to be?
Yes!
But mine shall destroy this imperfect creation
For he is Lucifer, bringer of light.
All apples are his seed
And all Apples shall bear his-”

Let me guess, a reference to Faust?

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