Twilight ran out of bits reacquiring what was lost when Tirek blasted Golden Oak Library. She decided to earn money by working in Sweet Apple Acres, but little did she realize what it is like to have Big Macintosh as a boss.
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TwiMac? I can get behind this
That's a rather interesting take on the limitations and powers of unicorn magic. Too bad Twilight can't use Rainbow Power to lift the trees out of the ground all on her own, but in the process she's seeing why Big Mac's like, well, a boss
Wow Twilight, crush a little bit harder?
Nice to see your Big Mac wasn't always a perfect pony, and had his own issues when he was younger. Of course, Eeyup Pony is still probably Best Stallion.
Twilight, Twilight, Twilight. You might be crushing hard on Big Mac, but after Lesson Zero you'd think you had learned your lesson about using mind-control spells on other ponies. They can be quite devastating to yourself.
See Twilight? Sometimes you don't need to worry your little equine heart over everything
See that Twilight, all it took was some extremely hard work to get your crush gears moving. That kick of his always gets the mare's hearts going I'm sure. And tough luck Rainbow, Twilight really won out working on the farm with Mac compared to you. I do hope Mac and Dash made up at some point though.
And it's good to see another TwiMac story, it's becoming an increasingly rare pairing recently. It's a shame too since they are quite cute together. It is my second favourite Mac ship, after all!
A few awkwardly worded sentences here and there, but no spelling errors as far as I can see. And the limits of magic are a good idea since they can't be used as a deus ex uproot-china today! Don't worry Twi, when it comes to picking apples you'll show them what magic can do!
Yeah, I could totally see Mac like that when he was younger, especially if his parents had left/died recently as well. Seeing ponies doing things like that to his business must have been like a punch to the gut. Doesn't make what he did to Rainbow right, but she did have something coming.
And I feel maybe alot of them might have been exaggerating, what with them being in Ponyville and all, but why hasn't Mac seeked out the ponies to apologize? I guess Rainbow might still hold the grudge, true to her character and all, but anyone else?
And Twily is always adorable when she's socially awkward!
Plus the grammar has been dramatically improved here so good job!
...WOW! Twilight, I am shocked! That would have been the purest, dick-move in exsistence!
And I would have thought the established "magic can't move what doesn't want to be moved", would apply to memories as well. I don't think anyone would willingly give up their memories.
But yeah, what Mac said made sense and it fits with his whole "brutally honest" character, and he seemed like he genuinely wanted to give Twilight some advice, but I think you might have written yourself into a corner here...
...ah well, I guess we'll see how this ends, won't we!
...Okay, you got out of the corner pretty well. Have a moustache
Seriously though, this was a nice little story and kept everyone well enough in character. Twilight's bitterness was believable, especially since it wasn't immediately thrown away after Mac asked her out. I liked that touch.
This was an excellent little story that I enjoyed. I usually nit-pick like crazy, but I enjoyed this too much to do so (Plus I'm tired and can't be bothered to find plot-holes and such. But they weren't obvious so that's always a plus!)
I look forward to, maybe, seeing another TwiMac off of you!
beautiful please make more I would like to see how this universes pairing keeps going.
BURN....
She hid insects under her eyes?
There was a cloud in the theatre?
Don't rely blindly on autocorrect, please.
6496651
Thanks, fixed!
...Though I was tempted to fix them in other ways, like explaining why bugs and clouds were there.
Twilight and Big Mac bonding over the murder of an orchard of apple trees.
This first chapter must sound like "Cupcakes" to somebody like Bloomberg.
No, No, No, No. Twilight, any plan which ends with you cackling like a cartoon villain is a bad, bad, plan.
Don't make me have to swat you on the muzzle with a rolled up newspaper missy!
This is very good! I didn't see any mistakes, and at the end I was
scaredThis was amazing. an incredibly fun read that I found myself giggling to on and off as I read. Very good work.