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ThatOneGuy92


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So much has changed.

Ponies have left behind the Equestria-That-Once-Was, and have taken to the vast expanse of space to find a new place.

It is here that we come to meet Big Mac, veteran of the loosing side of a brutal war, and captain of a Firefly-class spaceship. Here we meet his rag-tag crew, who all have a story. And here we follow their journey- one that crosses many stars, and one which will impact everypony in the 'verse.

Everything will change.

A MLP/Firefly crossover.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 26 )

Can't wait to see where this goes

This is amazing and you should feel amazing. :pinkiehappy:

Wow. This will go places.

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Thanks very much, Roach of Wrath :)

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Oh, Rainy Afternoon, you speak too highly of me! :twilightblush:

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And I hope you'll stick around for the ride! :twilightsmile:

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Oh yeah.
Through thick and thin.

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Hardly. This is an excellent concept and the writing seems pretty strong. I look forwards to seeing more.

Space travel?
Lunar Republic?
BIG MAC
You, good sir, have yourself a follower.

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Why, thank you kindly! I'll do my best to live up to your expectations! :twilightsheepish:

Y1

Quite good. Some issues with paragraphing (you shouldn't have two different people speaking in the same paragraph) but beyond that I noticed no issues with spelling.
I'm just going to go through and guess the characters and the comparative roles I think you're going to have them play. Let me know If I'm wrong.
Already mentioned ones first
Big mac: Malcolm
Applejack: Zoe
Rainbow: Jayne
Pinkie: Wash
Rarity: Inara
Fluttershy: River
Twilight: Shepard book

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AH! Thank you for pointing out the issue with paragraphing; I suppose that is what I get for being inspired at 1 in the morning. :twilightblush:
I'll go and edit the mistakes ASAP!

As for who is who- you obviously know who everypony that has been introduced is. As for the others, you'll just have to wait and see! :raritywink:

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Thank you kindly. Please bear with me these first couple of chapters. I have to set up everything, and introduce everypony. I promise, things will get much more exciting as the story progresses.

Y1

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I've had that happen to me so I know what you mean.
And if I have to wait and see then I guess I'll just do that, because this (so far) is of high enough quality to wait for.

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I'm happy that you think the story, as young and short as it is, is of high quality! :twilightsmile:
I can only hope to live up to your praise, and continue to write a story worth reading. :twilightsheepish:

Y1

I must admit I'm very interested to see how everything will fit together. The idea of Mac being dragged into an insane situation involving the bearers Elements of Harmony, a power struggle between Luna and Celestia, Discord and an insane host of other characters all fighting for control of something important has my mind reeling with the possibilitys. :raritystarry:

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It will be interesting, that is for sure. And Discord? Whatever gave you the idea that he is involved in any way, shape, or form? :raritywink:

Y1

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:trixieshiftright:
Call it a hunch.
:ajbemused:
A very strong hunch.

I do believe this'll be a crew of well behaved equines. Prone to ventures of misbehaving when called upon, only at most proper times. :eeyup:

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About time, I thought. Building up expectations and all that :raritywink:
But seriously, I finally broke through some major writers' block. Hopefully I can now move forward a bit more smoothly, and update with a bit more frequency.

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Thanks very much, Bronyhood of steel :twilightsmile:

Excellent introduction! I am looking forward to reading more!

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