Alone and far from home, Luna has sought out the changelings. Completely in their power Luna is entirely at the whim and mercy of the Queen of changelings, but what has prompted this strange encounter?
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Interesting, let us see what Luna wants from Chrysalis. Great story btw.
Very interesting. Go on...
Indeed! Do go on.
I have a feeling Luna is about to outmanoeuvre Chrysalis somehow. Can't wait to see it.
Really awesome, can't wait for more!
Princess of the Night.
Princess of Dreams. The Ex-Nightmare.
She knows very well what she's doing.
Everything is so mysterious and that is a good thing.
I was very interested in this when it first appeared on EqD or here can't remember anymore.
Reading the first chapter I wasn't so sure were this is heading and its still not completely clear after reading the second chapter.
Very good descriptive vivid writing along with a superb Characterization of both Princess Luna, the Reason I started reading, and Queen Chrysalis.
so in short more please
Damnit Luna! What is your angle?!
Interesting, I cant wait to see what happens next :3
So, Chrysalis will replace Luna now... interesting...
Chrysalis and Luna tow of my favorite character in the same fic and both seams to play major roles, this simply must be awesome
I really wonder what Luna's endgain is in all of this. cannot wait for it to all make sense.
I like it so far, sir.
Oh, a small plot
.
Good chapter, How I wonder, will Luna get out of this mess? Eager to find out, that's for sure ^_^.
So its been a couple more days than I like to admit between updates, but the next chapter IS nearly complete and on the way - I've been <insert generic excuse> in the meantime, but I'll also have another very nearly complete story to show for it - not a short comedy/crossover/random thingy. It's decidely not a comedy.
Edit - here it is. I'll not allow the next to be so long in coming.
Luna, you bitch.
i think luna is just adjusting to being a prisoner and is a little annoyed at the changelings for what happened. we shall see what happens next tho. good job ambion keep it up.
so slow Buildup BUT that also makes it so GOOD.
Excellent characterisation on the changelings as well as Princess Luna.
solid amount of Detail on the Location since there isn't a World to speak of "yet" atleast.
Still cannot even grasp were this is going. This includes everything, Goals of the Characters, Basic understanding on why Luna did even go there in the First place, how is this effecting everyone else, what the Magic used was all about, SO MANY QUESTIONS
I guess answers will come in due time.
This is really REALLY good!
It's so fascinating, you don't explain much, you leave things mysterious but... I feel that all will be revealed and I'm learning things at the same rate as the characters, not everything at once but a slow coming to understanding. Something like that anyway. If there was a way I could give you more than one thumb I would but I'm afraid you'll have to settle for one.
Oh plot
hmm need to search for a Luna + German Shepard Picture NOW.
Unfortunatly I bet I'll only find Luna and nocturnal animals.
Moar! Why hasn't this been updated yet?! MOAR!!!
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Er, not sure entirely how to work the blogomajig, so here should be what you seek.
Hmm... This is an interesting story so far. But is it going anywhere? So far, they have just talked back and forth without seeming to be moving forward. Maybe the chapters are just too short for me to notice any progress.
This story has become my favorite Chrysalis fic.
I like the interactions between the Queen and the night Princess. And also I'm rather intrigued by those orbs that Crhysalis extracted from Luna.
Keep it up ambion.
A bunch of thumbs up for you.
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everything is always going somewhere.
Trust me, or failing that, trust the story - I do, and it promises good things to come. 
814697 I can't trust authors cause 75% of them end up never finishing their stories, or end up taking 2 years to do it.
And can't trust the stories, if the author somehow screws it up in some way 
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Yes, the deep pain of unfinished stories, their half-death knells echoing across the authorverse... I pledged to myself I would never post a story for others that I'm not willing to stick with 'til the end - there's a constant stream of hopeful ideas and writings I have to euthanise because I cannot write them all, let alone to the fullness of completetion and quality I'd need to see. I can't gurantee completion due to ya know, being a puny human in a unfeasibly immense universe, but I can say I am...somewhat determined to make a point of finishing CHatNM, as it marks something like the turning of a new leaf (or moon, i suppose
) in my facet as a writer.
As for the story? Well, there's a lot of ways I could screw it up, but it seems fairly confident. That's what trust is for, yeah?
Little Moon. That name has grown onto me. From now all, Luna's nickname shall be Little Moon!
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Yes Little Moon just sounds so adorable. rather fitting for the Woona Side of Luna though I usually prefer Princess Luna in a Position with her Characteristics of dignity, mystery and power as is also displayed in this Story in a rather surreal way but so awesome to read.
Yay time for Diplomacy. Really liking this story, you get a feeling that Changeling's and Ponies really are alien in nature to one another when reading this. You're also good at including multiple characters without diverting the focus of the story which is Luna and Chrysalis, we'll see if you can keep this up upon Luna's return to Canterlot.
You.. you've gotta do somethin about that first paragraph. It hurts.
this is a lot like that other chyrsalis/Luna fic.
. . . coincidence?
i was like #69.
if anyone cares, which you guys probably don't :P
Oh that Pain of Mosquitoes
938197 Yes this and Changeling are certainly my favorite mysterious Luna - Changelings Story's I actually made the slight Comparison before and it can also be said for this Story.
"Combining Luna and Changelings makes such good Stories and while I would read it for your excellent take on Princess Luna alone the set makes it more mysterious.
This and Changeling Heart and the New Moon are certainly my favorites in this Type of writing.
Eery, slightly Creepy and above all Mysterious and while I know their are not combined in any Form, my mind cannot help to combine them, for this features a Journey, a Search for Changelings and CHatNM starts of inside the Changeling Den.
a Wonderful read of very good Quality, eagerly awaiting more. "
And the progress-direction becomes allot clearer now too.
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Yes, that is sort of the intent there.
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I'm nipping this kind of thinking in the bud.
Yes, I know of Changeling. I talked to Deceased when we both just started out these, to compare notes and such and clear the air before there was any air in need of clearing, all to avoid misunderstandings and ponderings of plagerism. I'd consider him a friend. No, I wasn't aware of that story when I started this, nor was he aware of this. Yes, I've read it and do really like it. No, CHatNM is not going in the same direction and is less dark, and Yes, I secretly think that Changeling is probably the better story of the two, and updates more frequently.
Trust me, I was the very first to worry about this matter
, and I've got the messages hanging around to prove it (or you could ask Deceased, he's sound out,, er, Irish for "he's grand out, so." 
)
Point is, no worries, be happy
for good things and swiss cheese legs
938248 I have no idea what you mean by that, but I care.
938444 by her holey hooves, thank you for the sentiment
938444 Yeah I understand, I was just setting up a statement.
938547 I know, It's hard to understand the tone of another person over the internet. No, I was not criticizing you or anything. Honestly, there are many ideas around the world- some are bound to be similar. so I understand. I have yet to read yours though because of the other fics that I need to catch up on.
just answer this, Is Luna one step ahead of chrysalis in your fic or what?
“I can take no more of this! Burn, you little wretches. All of you, Buuuurn!”
This needs to be placed in more Fics. It's just too funny.
I am so very confused. What is Luna attempting to accomplish?
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Very fair, and I didn't mean to seem as if I'd taken umbrage(I think I'm being fancy, but my understnading of the word is shaky
)
As for Luna being one step ahead? I don't think it spoils anything for anybody to say probably not, on what we've all seen.
940447 In the short term, trying to annihlate mosquitoes. In the long term...well, maybe even she isn't entirely sure. Or maybe she is. We'll have to wait and see.
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Actually...if you don't know. then i envy you. i envy you so much
Enjoy life as it is.
And it isn't worth caring about :P i know i didn't care.
This was never a surrender. This is a rescue mission.
The only question is, who's the target?
I can't tell who the protagonist is. That's fucking fascinating.
At the moment I like Surry.
Luna plus sentient parasites equals a masterpiece of awkward.
Luna plus nonsentient parasites equals comedy gold.
What's in that journal, dammit?
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You mean umbrage.
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I've, um...bridged that error.
I still wonder how can a dark story be rated as everyone, haven't read it yet just saying.
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I have fun explaining things, which sadly doesn't correlate to my ability to do so. Let's try anyway
First, some disambiguation. There is dark, and there is grimdark. A lot of people use the two as one, when I feel this is not the case. As they all get lobbed under the one tag, they are functionally the same despite the vast differences. Not to dwell on things, grimdark is, well, really damn grim. Tends to be a crapsack, and a relatively quick and painless death is a rare and fine oddity in a world otherwise filled with it.
Errr...If grimdark is pulling the trigger, dark is contemplating the crime? Am I making sense?
CHatNM is certainly darker than canon. It goes a bit into the sorts of emotions one might find unavoidably caught up with love (spoiler alert: This story has changelings!
) rather than a simplified 
=all good notion.
Things like jealousy, regret and confliction. Betrayal, trust and fear. Uncertainty.
To find use for the qoute that's been flying around my head all week: It's not always rainbows and butterflies
them)
It's compromise that moves us along
-Maroon 5 (
As for the everyone tag, I can be a lot more direct. I feel that this story is accessible to everyone. That's pretty much all there is to it. Just as a light hearted show can appeal to adults, I suppose something of a somewhat darker nature can be, if not appealing, than at least acceptable to everyone just the same.
I am open, even welcoming of discussion on these points if anyone feels that the dark and/or everyone tags are inappropriate for this story.
If at anytime in the future of CHatNM I feel the situation has given precedent for changing these, I will do so. Until then, I hope I've managed to explain a few things.
Now that I have read the first two chapters, I would tag this story as light-dark, too bad fimfiction doesn't have that tag
. Yeah I get your point between the differences of a dark story and a grimdark one (I tend to love the later 
). What I meant is that most dark stories contain, well, dark things 
, killing, rape, twilight going in a frenzy, you name it. Rare ones are dark for the emotions themselves.