A no pony really. Seriously why are you viewing me much less watching. I not that great a writer and I'm probably never will. At least I'm good with games.
Anthea, a young somewhat blind unicorn mare, can't go to sleep at night unless somepony is making contact or there's a source of light. Anthea has a cutie mark about calming ponies and making them fall asleep with her magic. It's sad that she's unable to do this to herself but maybe she just needs a little help from the night.
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that is should say either something more "lit a candle" or "went to light a candle"
I noticed a few other minor writing errors, it would probably be a good idea to read through what you have posted and see if you can spot any other little hiccups. You should never assume once it's posted it doesn't need you to work on it, you will always make mistakes and ignoring a work after you think you're done with it is one of the biggest mistakes any of us can make.
I enjoyed this one, it was fun to read.
I can't change it to lit or went to light because those two are past tense and I want to be all present tense, but thanks anyways.
5786820 it's just the wording feels off and a little wrong, and you really should fix all these little errors in the story. I'm approaching my "error tolerance threshold" reading this story.
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Like I said I want to keep this all present tense and it's very hard to not break the tense please to understand how hard it is to keep it present tense.
Oh dude; great effort, good story, and excellent plot, but the grammer errors and missing words here and there, they're a headache to look over.
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I know my grammer sucks I have a hard time keeping everything in present tense. If your asking why I don't do past tense it's because I don't like doing past tense, sure it's easier but having them mix is even easier which makes more mistakes. But hey it's better then my last entry, that one was just garbage.
5794909 The votes don't lie about that last part. Still, I find it impressive that you can make a good story without using past tense.
Great story, have a like!
Nice story!