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A late holiday gift for you all!
Hearth's Warming is just around the corner, and Princess Luna has not bought her sister a gift. With the help of her trusty possum friend Tiberius, Luna embarks on a (kind of) epic quest to find something for her beloved Celestia. Can she find the perfect present in time for the holidays? (without going completely insane that is)
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"Real buttercream icing!? No one makes that from scratch anymore!"
-Crocker
6789870 The last time i made a buttercream cake they complained it to be to hard to digest.
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Oh well. I personally love that kind of cake.
what a great and heart warming story! thank you forportraying luna in this manner, she so deserves more stories like this! a very fine job! thank you!!
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Thank you for reading! I very much agree with you wholeheartedly!
Where did these feels come from? And why can't I hold them all?
This was a cute sister-bonding time story
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My mother makes it. It's delicious.
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I'm glad you liked it! (both the story and your mother's cake )
MOAR Luna and Tiberius fics!!!!!
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There should be more. Maybe I will make that a reality. I do like Luna and her furry companion.
6802120 I have not yet had the pleasure of reading a comic with Tiberius in it, yet this fic gives me plenty of reason to now.
I never knew marsupials could be domesticated.
6789870 I did, and it was delicious. Was also chocolate flavored butter cream icing.
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Ohhhhh! Yum!
So, uh, I just added to favs, upvoted, and moved on, thinking "This guy just knows what he's doing, no need to praise or he might go down the overgrown ego alley and the good stuff would end." But judging from your comment on my page, uh... I wasn't quite right if -you- consider -me- so talented.
Let me tell you I gravely regret there are so few stories like this one on FimFiction. Genuinely positive, without trace of malice, good-hearted goofy fun with a bit of awkwardness, a lot of kindness and just the right amount of cute. Even reading the title I already was pretty sure I was in for a treat, and the story didn't disappoint.
Eh, actually, when I saw the title, at first I felt a little pang of jealousy "Why didn't I get that idea?" - and then after a while of thought came to the conclusion "Because no matter how I love this theme, I'm just not good enough to write this kind of stories!"
Hey, I agree with the other guy. More Luna&Tiberius. And give Tiberius a bit more of actual role!
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Thank you.
Just thank you.
That means so much to me personally. I haven't done much of anything on the site in a while. The last two months I have had almost no motivation due to switching depression medication (one of the side effects.) so I've just been moping around in my own pity. But you saying that has put energy back into me. I write happy stories like this because they give me hope. And that's exactly what I needed right about now. I am excited to say that there is another story about these two coming, and I'm sure that it won't disappoint! No more excuses. I'm getting back to work! You helped me out more than you could know.
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And yes I do think you are talented
love this story
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Thank you! That makes me so happy!
I write my stories for the people like you!
7192044 I like that you added Tiberius.You don't him in a lot of stories.That was one of the reasons why I like your story. Please write more stories with him. Also did you know that Luna can talk to animals like Fluttershy?
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Yup, one of my favorite facts not shown in the show. I get a lot of material from the book of the two sisters and the comics
7192415 I read it before.I also read a lot of the comic books
This was very sweet. I've read very few (if any) Luna fics that include Tiberius, and I think the two of them make a great pair.
The story itself was nice, but as an editor, I do have to point out that there were dozens of errors in there—grammar, punctuation, spelling, and phrasings. One such phrasing that stuck out was "beckon call." It's actually "beck and call," but when people say it out loud it almost always sounds like "beck 'n call," so it's a reasonable mistake. It's even been Googled incorrectly so many times that it has its own entry listing the correct phrase instead of just a "did you mean x?" message.
Apologies of it sounds like I'm railing on you—the story itself was really quite heartwarming and fun. Upvote from me.
Totally not enough Tiberius stories, especially not ones as sweet as this.
Needs more views. Well done!