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DVB


A Hispanic nerd with a few stories in mind. Haven't written much in a while so enjoy my stories. Review them and tell me what you think of them.

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Dove was a pony of peculiar views. She was an unicorn yet she frowns upon the use of its magic. At best, she views it as meant for entertainment and at worse, as something dangerous she detests.

An argument leads Dove into the Everfree Forest where she meets someone who's experience with magic is more than she could have guessed and forcing her to confront the side of her she has hidden.

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looking at her refection in a nearby mirror

I think you meant "looking at her reflection in a nearby mirror", I noticed a few other misspelled words as I read, but this was the most glaring error I spotted.

I also noticed you used pegasi in place of pegasus. Just a quick reminder, pegasus is the singular and pegasi is the pluaral. Don't feel too bad, I've seen a few other authors make the same mistake.

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