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Harms Way


Admirer of Sunset Shimmer and Adagio Dazzle

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"In brightest day, in blackest night,

No evil shall escape my sight.

Let those who worship evil's might

Beware my power--Green Lantern's light!"

Needs more description, like a lot more.

5708535 Yeah, I could have done better on the description. Hoping this new one is better suited.

5708929
New one? Are you planning a sequel?

5709636 Maybe down the road, yes. But I put up a new description for this story.

A sequel is now in the works

Why did Sunset succumb so easily given that she is just as powerful by herself as Twilight, maybe more. Is she faking? Because that would make for a good confrontation in the next story. Oh! Or was Flash sick and he comes in and finds out what happened afterword, and tries to stop it with his limited understanding of how Magic works, Or.. Does the magic then affect Sonata and Aria, which creates a power struggle?
So many potential conflicts..
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Or Trixie! She would be competent enough to at least put up a fight, besides, she wants to be in charge (Or at least the most important), and that means stopping them at all costs!

5747131
So many good ideas. Good thing the sequel hasn't been completed yet. Gives me a chance to look at some feedback from those who read the story. I have thought of one of those ideas myself. Not saying which one though because it will spoil the sequel. At first, I thought it was kind of a bad way to end the sequel. But seeing someone else suggesting the same idea, maybe I might use it in the sequel after all.

Holy crap, my first 1k viewed story! Thank you all so much for this. Now seeing as how this be St. Patrick's Day.... lets party!!! :rainbowwild:

I'll be looking forward to the sequel.

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The sequel is nearly complete. Thinking about adding 1-2 more chapters to it and it will be done. Feel free to check it out, see how you like it, and comment on anything you think needs improving. :twilightsmile: My Little Human: Rule of the Dazzlings

5748335 I cannot wait to see which one you went with.

5804363 Go ahead and see for yourself my friend.

Okay so I did my own alternate ending to this story because I didn't like your hypno-rape stories. It was nothing against you just the stories. Here it is http://www.fimfiction.net/story/262753/friendship-trumps-mind-control you don't have to read it or like that I made this story, just I thought I'd let you know I made this in response to your story.

Holy Snapple. They won! :pinkiegasp:
... And I liked it:twilightsheepish:

... To the sequel,tallyho! :yay:

I have the same ring on as the cover picture except the jem is a emerald.

Hmm, not bad. More trampling next time, please xD

6760429
Thank you. I have been considering doing a rewrite for this story. :twilightsmile:

6760469 Looking forward to it. Mainly cause this seems to be the first Dazzlings story that has a bit of foot fetish action and, if you ask me, Adaggio is the perfect mistress for that (especially if she'd be trampling Fluttershy or Sunset :pinkiehappy:)

"Its called Tom and Jerry!" said Sonata as Aria sat down on the couch. "A show from like a long time ago about a cat who is always trying to catch a mouse with different plans, but fails each time."

It's an excuse for slapstick. It's great.

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