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Azure129


Fic writer/reader. Humor, romance, drama. You can read stories by me about other fandoms at my ff.net account :) And please support me on patreon! https://www.patreon.com/user?u=319852&u=319852&ty=h

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“Yes, Princess, I’m ready to use my magic for good instead of evil…most of the time.”

“I’ll leave the Elements with you, Twilight…just in case.”

Directly following the events of “Keep Calm and Flutter On” Discord and Celestia call each other out on these little ‘disclaimers’ and try to explain their words while still maintaining their new friendship. They soon agree on some interesting conditions for Discord’s recent reform, leading to the castle, some Royal Canterlot Voice from Luna, cake, and an interesting night and morning as Discord figures out how to relate to his former princess foes in a much less evil (if as obnoxious as ever) sort of way. He especially enjoys his new ‘friendly’ way of bothering Celestia.

Later, following Tirek’s defeat (and Discord’s final reform), the chaos master and the sun princess assess how their friendship has gone and where it might go from here. Luna throws in her two bits as well. Naturally, cake is eaten. And, of course, no matter how reformed he may become, Discord ‘loves’ teasing Celestia as much as ever…and it’s sort of grown on Celestia too.

(Rated Teen really only because of some suggestiveness, and I just want to err on the side of caution :) )

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wow,
i really like it so far
very excited for more ^^
#DislestiaIsBestShip <3<3

I'll read this later...

5588485 Thank you so much :twilightsmile: I'm glad you're enjoying it! I'll try to post the second part soon!

Wow, this is really good.

I will greatly enjoy this as I already have.

Oh, bravo! This is flowing very naturally. The only part that seemed forced at all was when he called her beautiful--everything else was absolutely believable and spot on. I love you have Celestia reacting in ways that show both her immediate emotional reactions and how those reactions are tempered with the wisdom of her maturity. And the little hints of a deeper Discord are proving to be just adorable.

5590304 Thank you :twilightsmile: I'm happy you've enjoyed the emotional reactions--writing these two is so fun for me. I'll try to have the second part up very soon, and I hope you'll like that as well!

This was a hilariously funny story.
Though this version of Discord is not necessarily like my preferred version I think it was the perfect choice for this story and worked very well.
I'm looking forward for more :twilightsmile:

5591396 Thank you so much, I'm glad you've enjoyed it so far :twilightsmile: I know what you mean--Discord's such a complicated character, there are definitely a lot of versions of him to love. I'm hoping to try writing him a few different ways in future stories just for the fun of it. :)

5607723 LOL, yeah, just started posting here a few weeks ago--I figure everyone on my ff account is expecting HA! stuff, so this would be a better place to get more readers and feedback, you know? :) Everything I post here, I'm posting on the ff account at the same time. Thanks for all the favorites!

I enjoyed this, but it made me crave cake. Luckily there was one piece of vanilla cake with strawberry frosting still left from the weekend.

What a wonderful chapter, Azure :twilightsmile:
I enjoyed it tremendously and the dynamic you established between Discord and Celly really has grown on me.
Although this Discord somehow don't want to fit into my personal headcanon of his character quite as well as your Celly I like him very much nonetheless.
One reason for me to usually dislike Celly, incidentally, has been just her professionalism and stiffness that you had Discord mentioning.
Seeing her livening up so much really does her character wonders.

Also, I don't know if it's been intentional but your narrative has mirrored Discord's jumpiness and chaos in a very entertaining way.
The chapter's been constantly playing with the readers mood. Jumping from romance, to facepalm and back to romance in a snap.
That has been a criminally good way to bind my interest and keeping the suspense at a constant level.
(Though I might add, that the effect also could wear of if used over too long a period of time.)

I said it, probably a hundred times already, but I really do like the way you are telling this story. It's immensely entertaining to read.
Thanks for the long chapter, Azure :twilightsmile:

oh my gaaaawd
that was soooooooooo cute :3
perfect ending <3

5610048 Congratulations on finding cake! I definitely ate some while writing this--I figured it was a requirement to make sure the story was as accurate regarding snacks as possible.:twilightsmile:


5610415 Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it!


5611486 Thank you! :pinkiehappy:

5609784 Glad to hear it! :twilightsmile:

I came here for the romance, I stayed for... Discord.
Seriously - that guy's a jerk. I like to dislike him. He's the most funny prankster around, even beating Luna to it. He's annoying, he's unpredictable, he's a walking, floating, flying, sometimes even breathing catastrophe for every plan and order. And you captured that. More so, this was one of the - if not the - best portrayals of his character I came across so far. He's playful, he's a trickster, he's chaotic - but he isn't a cruel meanypants. He's perfectly Discord. It was so enjoyable to read, I can't thank you enough for that! No unnecessary fourth-wall-jokes, too. No all-the-time over-the-top. It was... refreshing. A relief.
Celestia was good too, don't get me wrong. It's just that her character doesn't seem to be as tricky as his. There are quite a lot of stories out there portraying her perfectly fine. But sadly, it's rare to see Discords character captures that well.
I especially liked the tension between those two. Even at the end, I couldn't say how things would turn out in the long run. Heck, I still can't tell if he actually confessed some sort of romantic feelings towards her or not. It opens up possibilities. Enough space for interpretation. Their chemistry was just wonderful.

I had a great time reading this story.

Thank you!

5661126 That’s exactly my take on Discord too—you hate him because he’s such a cheesy, selfish, random jerk (not mean or evil, but truly a first class jerk) but at the same time you love hating him, and it’s just a good time to watch him work. I’m so glad you thought I captured him well, thank you! :pinkiehappy: I love trying to write him pretty much because he’s such an odd/tricky character to try writing,--there’s no set pattern for him but there’s definitely a way for him to be that works. I applaud Faust for coming up with him as a character and for how the MLP writing staff have developed him—he’s become the most complicated character on the show in a lot of ways, and I only hope we can see more of him in the future. But anyway I’m happy my presentation of him in this story came off well and that you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: And I’m also very happy you liked his chemistry with Celestia. In this case I wanted to leave things a little vague just because I know not everyone ships them but at the same time I think those two could just become incredibly close friends even if they didn’t take it to the next level. They compliment each other in this weird way that I really like exploring SMILE.

Thank you again! :twilightsmile:

5663069 i happen to agree with mermeous. You truly have captured discords personality very well. Most people cant do that. i hope you update this soon.so yeah great job so far.:pinkiehappy:

5675374 Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked my portrayal of Discord too :twilightsmile: As for updates, this was actually just a two part story, but I'm happy you liked it enough to want to read more. But I am working on one full length story featuring Discord right now, and I'm planning to start posting a few more in the future. He's just so fun to write, I can't help myself lol.

5679246 thanks for working on mkre stories with discord then. Im looking forward to it.:pinkiehappy:

Ah, finally. The perfect dislestia story. :raritystarry: My life is complete.
I mean, the interactions were just flawless! Celestia isn't too angry or bitter as she often portrayed in dislestia fics, but things never got to mushy-gushy either. It really made for a fun, addicting read. :derpytongue2:
NOW I MUST BE ONTO THE NEXT CHAPTER!

5742473

Thank you so much :pinkiehappy: I just love writing these two interacting, there’s so much there with how their characters can clash and relate, you know? I hope you like part two!

This has actually been one of my favorite fics to write. I’m thinking of doing a little series of mini mid-quel stories about them trying to be roommates either set between parts one and two or set after part two. If/when I manage to get around to that, I hope you’ll enjoy them as well :twilightsmile:

AAAAH I JUST FINISHED CHAPTER TWO AND I WANT MORE :raritydespair:

5766083 Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: There may be more in the future, if you're interested--I'm trying to work out a few ideas now.

5766083 Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: There may be more in the future, if you're interested--I'm trying to work out a few ideas now.

This was a great story! Maybe, there can be a sequel? Maybe? Please?

5791576 Thank you so much, I'm very happy you enjoyed it :twilightsmile:

As for a sequel...:raritywink:

(But (for anyone who wants to read some more of this) please track this story since it/they (it's a little complicated XD) won't be posted as a separate fic :yay: )

Finally! :raritystarry: I do not exactly know how long I've wated, but DANKE SCHÖN! (that means thank you :raritywink:)

6100092 You're very welcome! :twilightsmile: And thanks so much for the comment (no one's commented so far, I was starting to be afraid no one liked the first midquels :twilightsheepish: )

6100092 uuuh another german reader hehe
freu mich auch mal nen deutschen hier zu sehen

6104073 Hehe :twilightsheepish: danke, freut mich auch dich kennen zu lernen :pinkiehappy:

:rainbowlaugh: I got so inspired for an ingenious evil plan!!!!
Lol, this fic gave me a brilliant idea how to avoid a dinner party this weekend
(with the most evil kinsman I have)
Thank you so much Azure129!!!
...:raritywink: and great chapter by the way!

:rainbowlaugh: I got so inspired for an ingenious plan!!!!
Lol, this fic gave me a brilliant idea how to avoid a dinner party this weekend
(with the most evil kinsman I have)
Thank you so much Azure129!!!
...:raritywink: and great chapter by the way!

6149429 I think Discord would be very pleased to know he's inspired an evil plan to get someone out of an orderly social obligation :raritywink: Good luck!

And thanks, so glad you enjoyed it! :pinkiehappy:

Sorry! I didn't have WLAN for a looooooong time :twilightblush: So I didn't realize that you already updated this story! I know I'm coming like the old Fassnacht but now I could finally read again
( :twilightoops: my life was so empty!)
As always nice chapter (Like we all expected)
I'm looking forward to the next chapter of this story and the next one of
"The Chaothic Night Ever" :raritywink:
Have a nice day...:rainbowhuh: or night...whatever time it is in your country right now:twilightsmile:
Schnitzy is happy!

6237962 Lol, thanks, glad you enjoyed it :twilightsmile: I'm going to try and have the next chapter of this and of "Most Chaotic Night Ever" up before I head to Bronycon in a couple of weeks--I hope you like them :yay:

Comment posted by ZeKaiserGuy deleted Jul 25th, 2015

6242531 Thank you very much!
And have fun at the Bronycon:twilightsmile:

What a fun chapter. Silly guard, seeing Tia flounce around in a maid costume is the raise. And I agree with Discord's interpretation of the "surprise inspections."

6299458 Excellent point about that being the 'raise'--I might mention something like that in the next midquel if it's all right with you :scootangel:

Oh and Discord is totally going to get proven right about the surprise inspections thing soon :raritywink:

6303368 Feel free to borrow any ideas you want from me, I'd love to see the guards bro-hoof Discord in gratitude for that maid outfit. Just as I would love to see Discord catching the Princesses doing a "surprise inspection" with binoculars.

6303911 Thanks so much :twilightsmile: The Poker story is definitely happening (I've already drafted like 85% of it lol), I hope you enjoy it :)

very nice new chapter, too!
You constantly surprise me, azure, how you manage to make these incredibly plain and predictable conversations/flirts so incredibly entertaining to read. I mean really, it nothing special at all and yet I can't stop grinning while reading.

Also it's nice to see how he's starting to get more considerate of others and is growing in this one, too.
You stories are wonderful slice of live, exactly what I need in the evenings. (Timezone GMT+1)
Nothing to exciting, and nothing to plain. Just awesome character-dynamics and jokes.

I take it you too are still having fun writing it?^^

yaaaaaay
wow i really enjoyed this chapter ^^
and very excited for the next one :DD
im very curious to see where all this leads in the end ^^
the romance and stuff ;3

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