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The Technological Age was at the same time the best and worst thing that ever happened in Equestria. Bringing a wide spread of advanced machinery and mechanization for a cheap price all around Equestria and beyond. However, the sudden improvement in technology gave ponies and other species the chance of experimentation, leading to dangerous analysis procedures and prototype testing that were the result of injuries and property damage.

The militia formed the Tech Control who assaulted the uncontrollable riots to protect the 'more important' cities. But this only caused conflict from one city to another which ultimately led to a war. The Technological Age was once an amazing time, a time were the bring of advanced appliances were available for the public and cutting edge technology was revealed. But now, it's a battlefield, were the fragmented pieces of harmony lay on each individual corpse showing how much peace is now... non-existent.

Time passed and lives were taken, Rainbow Dash never thought that being in the Wonderbolt military air force could be so… violent. Being part of the Wonderbolts was her dream, but what she didn’t realize is that ending lives wasn’t.

Edited by AG Phenxore

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 5 )

EHEHEH, TECH IS BETTER THAN MAGIC IN THIS STORY! THE AUTHOR IS STUPID AND GROSS AND EVIL AND A HUMAN AND GROSS AND EVIL AND STUPID...(This is a joke)
(I like this! Keep it up.)

5572413 Ha ha! Thanks!

Interesting first chapter, but I'd suggest getting a proofreader for little grammatical and spelling errors here and there. Over all, cohesive enough and interesting enough to catch my eye, so have a like and fave. This fic could be great Nix and as such, I expect great things out of this fic Nix, great things. Do not disappoint. :)

I like the idea.

A proofreader would help with the typos and sometimes awkwardly phrased sentences.

But it's a good start.

Though I do believe some backstory is needed on the Tech Control faction.

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