- Member Since 24th Mar, 2012
- offline last seen Oct 23rd, 2023
Jacob Applehoof
Hello everypony,this is your friendly every day earth pony. I run a general store outside of Ponyville's orchards,and ill happily help any pony in need
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- Jacob Applehoof · 8.8k words · 29 2 · 497 views
- Avoidant Trixie · 11k words · 48 2 · 1.9k views
- Jacob Applehoof · 16k words · 156 41 · 3.7k views
- Stealth1139 · 12k words · 20 2 · 2.5k views
- Night Princess · 2.1k words · 46 7 · 1.9k views
- Octavio the Umbreon · 8.2k words · 25 7 · 1.7k views
- Your Friendly Neighbor · 3.3k words · 53 2 · 1.6k views
- Wolfe15 · 7.7k words · 95 7 · 8.9k views
Stats
Page generated in 0.183 seconds
Total duration
964 users online
1,301,136 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I CLAIM THE FIRST POST
Ohohohohohohoh YOU CAN DO IT ALL NIGHT LONG HA!!!!!!!
A crack down the horn....That sounds so unbelievably painful man....
Luna's face made a sly smile before returning to her usual poker-face
1000 Years on the moon gives ya quite a while to practice that Poker-face Eh?
Spike thinks as a ten year old would
I think I have a good idea of what's about to happen.
IF YA KNOW WHAT I'M SAYIN'!
(Lyra Style)
Fuck yes.
Oh my, I didn't realize y two were so close"
I saw an Error.
570448
fixed :D
570996
If you want I can do some proofreading and such for you. The other guy was right on foreshadowing and such too. But yea I don't have a real keyboard at the mo so I'm left reading stories.
BTW a good foreshadow could have been. 'Rainbow Dash, fly out the window, mind racing from her encounter with Trixie' followed by something like 'Dash laid in the tree and no matter how hard she tried her mind drifted back to the cyan unicorn' could do similar things with Trixie too. It's like my writers bane for a long time was anything in between the big stuff. I look back at the Outlanders Trials and Outlanders Cure(which are fairly recent) and can already see massive improvement. Just give it a bit and you can always go back and flesh up old stuff.
Bucking brutal 7 minute message lol
I love it so far! keep it up, although, you should really watch those typo's :)
AWESOME BRING ON SOME MORE!!!!!!!!!
please
573090
Glad your enjoying it, I write casually, so I should be updating at least one every other day...mostly after midnight :3
Not what I was expecting, which is nice.
575307
Im glad...and while i dont want to spoil anything, if you want to tell me what you thought in a message...go ahead
Tension in the ending there much.
.she didn't want to think to think about it.
THE "To Think" HAS BEEN DOUBLED
The smalls and feels of the royal library flooding back.
The "Smalls and feels"?
Trixie was a fast learned,
Looks like they didn't Learned you enough in school
the Pegasi whether task force
Weather*
Dash was the same high as Trixie,
Dude, we are all so High, it's hard to tell anymore....
from the shape
From Her shape is a little better worded
Saw smiled wide, sitting tall and leaning forward
Where the fuck is Saw?
I WANT TO PLAY A GAME
Similar to tickling in the sense that it is effective only if somepony elts does it to a unicorn.
Somepony Else*
The magical horn sences
SENSES*
Are you putting these in FOR me to discover them?
as her wings began flappingn
FLAPPING*
but kept sucking p
Sucking Pee from a straw
and thumb up this video.
Youtube much?
ALL in ALL I liked it, Work on your grammar though, it ruins the atmosphere
DAMN CLIFF HANGERS
582571
my bad...most of them were because my iPad hates when I clop and write...and...well...writing that made me hard
no worries this is getting pretty good
keep it up.
edit1: what is this first post? how acvard
Russian Rainbow Dash is best pony
591037
IKR...I just thought of the episode where AJ goes "My sister's speakin' in Fancy" and had to remake it
Is it wrong for me to want to slap Spike repeatedly for this?
Me trixie-sta
encrypted-tbn3.google.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcRbDTtQgZ8HYjAICMjNI1nCzVsnmt6uGh2HQRyTQ5MPEaS15nhJzw
570413
INDEED
Ultra super special kawaii desu desu mode activated!
LOVE IT! I think this couple will be fantastic
I LOVE IT!
Liked, favourited and watching. I think you may be one of the best writers on this website for story content. While I have noticed many areas where your grammar is a little ropey, I COULD NOT CARE LESS! The tenderness of your writing and the build up of the relationship is something that I always look for in a romantic story. I love the way you actually give the couple a relationship instead of saying Trixie+Dash=WILD CRAZY MONKEY SEX! I think this is probably one of the best fics I have ever read, please keep it coming.
That ending, so much of a cliff hangar I almost fell off the edge
Rainbow Dash is speaking communisty? LOVE IT!
Makes it all the better as Rainbow Dash is actually everywhere in my Russian History notes. Russian Rainbow Dash is helping me pass my A-Levels!!
583140 Don't worry about it, I like fixing things, it makes me feel all giddley inside.
But, Heck. I liked the story itself.
sooo ... how are luna and night maremoon connected?
595697
In due time, trust me. Everything will be explained
Right, I like the whole take on the concept of there being two personalities shared by Nightmare Moon and Luna. The whole idea that they are two seperate identities is fascinating. I like very much
awww cute
i'm with twi here Fortress O Books
2.bp.blogspot.com/-ITNTAlNOy3M/Tm_ZGG3REZI/AAAAAAAAMHo/hevYS0bgCzU/s320/57427+-+Book_Fort+Hnnnnnnng%2521+adorable+adorable_as_fuck+adorkable+artist+dreatos+artist+valcron+books+cute+fortress_of_knowledge+in-DAW-gestion+twilight_sparkle.png FTW
616141
I would perfer keeping the other two company...if you catch my drift
570325 he IS a 10 year old
619724
?
a nice, tender romance scene. But what a cliff hanger...again. There must be a speedy update, otherwise I am liable to start smashing things. I must know how the love story between Rainbow Dash and Trixie develops. I MUST!
why no royal 'we' with Luna's speech?
619724 Hm, I seem to have thought he was Twelve.
622754
For the same reason Trixie doesn't refer to herself in the third person. It is hinted upon in chapter 10...about how Luna just needed to come to terms that she isn't more than one pony...and that Nightmare is more of a disease than a personality. It is implied heavily there. Other than that...um...CUZ I SAID SO...
622803 his mind is that of a thirteen year old...if we translated this into the real world
624203 But we can't because that would break the Universe.
This is so much love and emotional in this story keep it up.
Spike... you little bastard.
Either way, nice chapter.
592388
Nice edited picture.
Trixie is best blue pony
FIRST!
a little fast this chapter but good sofar.