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I think I have a good idea of what's about to happen.
IF YA KNOW WHAT I'M SAYIN'!
Me trixie-sta
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Nice edited picture.
Trixie is best blue pony
I may have to stop here. It was hard enough to overlook the spelling, grammar, and pacing, but I'm not sure I like where this is going. Plus, having Trixie just fall in love with everypony that happens to be nice to her? I'm not usually one to criticize, but it just doesn't work for me. I'll go a few more chapters in case it gets better, but idk.
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^This...except I am one to criticize. I'll probably end up reading to the end cuz I love the 3 characters it seems to be about mainly...but honestly? That's it.
OK, to me, this story got a little too chaotic for me to continue. Read one Trixie-wants-forgiveness/to-change fic, read them all. But this seems rushed(in the making that is) making it less than other fics. The "LunaxFluttershy-RomeoxJuliet-like-story" held me at least till the end, but no, sorry. Still, I can't say this story is bad by any means, just lacking.
Hell no! It doesn't work like that!
Well...that's one way to know someone quickly... Uh... I need to uh.... Go. *Sprints out and over the fence*
To be fair you were all, except twilight, terrible to her.