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Ohohohohohohoh YOU CAN DO IT ALL NIGHT LONG HA!!!!!!!
Oh my, I didn't realize y two were so close"
I saw an Error.
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fixed :D
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If you want I can do some proofreading and such for you. The other guy was right on foreshadowing and such too. But yea I don't have a real keyboard at the mo so I'm left reading stories.
BTW a good foreshadow could have been. 'Rainbow Dash, fly out the window, mind racing from her encounter with Trixie' followed by something like 'Dash laid in the tree and no matter how hard she tried her mind drifted back to the cyan unicorn' could do similar things with Trixie too. It's like my writers bane for a long time was anything in between the big stuff. I look back at the Outlanders Trials and Outlanders Cure(which are fairly recent) and can already see massive improvement. Just give it a bit and you can always go back and flesh up old stuff.
Bucking brutal 7 minute message lol
Ultra super special kawaii desu desu mode activated!
LOVE IT! I think this couple will be fantastic
Oh god....The cliche....It hurts us.
1968593 Cliche's exist because they're awesome