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Jacob Applehoof


Hello everypony,this is your friendly every day earth pony. I run a general store outside of Ponyville's orchards,and ill happily help any pony in need

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can't wait for more. :twilightsheepish::raritywink::scootangel::trixieshiftleft::rainbowderp::pinkiegasp::derpytongue2::yay::moustache::trollestia::eeyup:

2825994 oh my, the gang's all here, it seems :ajsmug:

i love the "Or not" added at the end.:twilightsmile:

2828618 Prologues tend to do that :twilightsmile:

long nights are long... :unsuresweetie:

2886642 Oh you wait...things haven't even STARTED yet :pinkiehappy:

Ive got one complaint... If trixie gets her body back... Won't there be two trixies?? Hence the reason she turned to dust?? Other then that so far so... GREAT!!!

3090709 Thanks. The next chapter is on hold until I'm ready with college, but thanks, it means a lot to get credit for my work :ajsmug:

hmm...what to say. First off, I am so frigging glad you either found an editor or learned from all the grammar errors in the first story, it was very painful at times. Second, it seems like when the 'butterfly' effect comes into play, nothing ever goes happy for the main character. :pinkiehappy:
But I am liking this so far, it kinda sucks for Trixie as she's pretty much never going to be with the the one she loves again. I imagine she is going to be a emotional roller coaster for awhile. Not sure if this is going to turn out to be a Trixie x Luna story in the end, but if so hopefully it has more time to build up then the last one as Trixie jumped from liking Twilight to Dash in about one chapter. I am looking forward to seeing how this plays out.

Okay, I'm going to do a before and after comment (Ill comment my guesses then ill read it and you'll see what I think if it after that). I'm guessing that this will be a good chapter. Maybe Trixie will get a better grasp on her situation, maybe she will learn that she will be stuck that way. I hope we see this worlds Dash and Trixie as there new born relationship grows.

But I'm curious on the fact that if Trixie gets turned back into pony form wont that cause the same problem that turned her to dust in the first place? Think about it, if she gets turned into a pony again there will be 2 Trixie in this universe causing it to go all wonky and turn her back to dust? Its been a while sense Ive read the first story so I hope I remember it correctly. Anyway I for see this being a future problem that will probably be dealt with in a future chapter.

Anyway back on topic. I love this series and I can't wait to read this chapter. Its been a long wait but I think its worth it.

~Michael A.

Okay at the beginning I though that the short chapter length was going to be a problem. Oh boy I was wrong! You managed to condenses the same amount of information in 1,800 that I've seen people have trouble doing in 5,000!  You also managed to avoid an information dump and make it an enjoyable read, ingenious writing!

As far as my predictions went give me credit I got close! Though I was completely off with some of my predictions. I was right about my theory that Trixie got a better grasp on her situation. Im hoping that we will see more problems with two Trixie's being in this demention. I hope that in later chapters you get into more detail about Trixie and Dashes relationship. 

Im curiose to see if my second theory still stands. I mean it still can fit. I still think that two Trixies will be a problem in the future. Im not sure to be honest. 

So overall this chapter surpassed my greatest expectations! I hope that the future chapters will be updated more regularly. At first I thought this story would just be a stretched ripoff of the first story, I only thought this because I didn't see how you would continue it. But you managed to not only make a GREAT continuation but a great story plot! You haven't ceased to amaze me yet and I look forward to future chapters!

~Michael A.

3203394 I hope to do so, as well...I'm not too enticed by the idea of writing in between my college...I'll try, though,:heart:

I was wondering when you would come back. :O

I enjoyed the chapter, but if I were to say one thing, it would be to insert a space after your ellipses, as that is more "grammatically" correct, and also looks a bit cleaner. Otherwise, keep it up. ^^

Wait wait in the original Trixie and RD were reunited and they realized that they loved each other :raritydespair: so what is up with this :unsuresweetie: I'm so confused :facehoof:

That was great chapter :pinkiecrazy: Whoa wait isn't bad if the same amount of the same mass occupies a close area that reality will shutter and destroy itself. :pinkiegasp: Or is it if they touch? :twilightsmile: I think this will be very interesting to see how the Trixies and Rainbow dash handle this. :twilightsheepish: I WANT MOAR SOON! :flutterrage: If that is alright with you :fluttershyouch:

NEED MORE!!!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage::flutterrage: Please keep writing chapters :fluttershysad::fluttershysad::fluttershysad:

3727073 I will, soon. I am having quite a lot of issues writing at this point. I'll try, really <3

Dashie is about to get 20% more Trixie fun now!!!!

"You were a fool to do this, sister." Celestia huffed, narrowing her eyes as she trotted towards a guard who had been knocked unconscious from the changelings past excursion. She sighed, shaking her head lightly as she looked towards Luna and the glowing cloud that was Trixie."She was in the ether...the void! Nothing exists there. Are you so naive that you do not see the potential danger?"

So I still have reason to hate Celestia... Is there one fic where I can actually like Celestia? So far no. That's like saying I'll let sans marry Chara or Frisk. Or on a related term Flash x Twilight. Hell no!

Luna put a hoof to her face, sighing softly."This is going to be a long night~"

I hope so. Hey, can you fuse Trixie and Nightmare? Please? And make them a dragon pony with a horn.

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