Fluttershy and Big Macintosh have two beautiful children. Sunflower, an energetic earth filly and Applewood Jr., a shy little pegasus colt. Life couldn't seem more perfect for the children.
But their childhood won't be too easy. It will be filled with challenges, new friends, bullies, special someponies and finding their true purposes in life.
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Good story.
That's really adorable. I think you're doing a good job so far.
It should be 'smiled', that's the only mistake I could detect.
I really like it. Gave me really good feelings. Nice work keep it up
The dialogue bugs me just a little bit as I don't really see the two of them using nicknames like that, but to each their own. Its a wonderful start and I look forward to more!
Wow, I just realized this story marks 300 favorites in my list. Might as well promote it
Omg the feels.... this is too cute thumbs up can't wait for more good job :D
D'aww.
So cute.
GAH! So cute!
Only criticism is that the pacing is a little fast. Slow it down a bit and you'll be fine. I will be following from this point forward.
its just tooooo cuuuuute
Please don't stop. This story is full of awwws and feels and cuteness.
Good to see that this isn't canceled. I want to see where you go with this.
Yay! I'm really glad you got some inspiration back. This story is cute as ever.
this is ....... sickeningly sweet mabye tone down the affection its too mushy that is all
and they cry aLOT