I started with fanfics, so long ago, and it seems that I always revert to it when my inspiration for original stories wanes. Even so, I've never written MLP fiction before. Should be fun!
They'd seen each other around, but had never truly interacted or gotten to know one another. They shared a spotlight once, but that was all. Fate keeps throwing them together, and now they can start to notice one another. The two quiet, shy souls can begin to connect...but how?
A FlutterMac/MacinShy fanfiction
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This is adorable. I love how, despite Fluttershy being...Fluttershy, she is willing to speak to speak to somepony outside her circle. I suppose she's comfortable enough around Big Mac. I'm excited to see where this is headed.
Fluttershy's eyes are a turquoise/cyan.
Uh oh... When Discord gets a hold of this.... I can see his love rival becoming Big Mac... and Cheese.
nice start can't wait to read more
I like it. Fluttershy is hilarious when we get to hear her thoughts. Moar!
More! My precious needs more! Your a really good writer
Loving this fic. Very well done and it's always cute seeing awkward fluttershy. Have a happy feastshare day! (I actually like this idea for a pony holiday)
I like how you're keeping Big Mac's dialog to a believable minimum. It's very convincing.
And a Fluttershy and Big Mac duet? That is my dream.
This is...just...this. Life and life more abundantly....excuse me. I mean, I just love this story. Fluttershy is just so adorable! I can't wait for the next part!
Good story, not sure where all the downvotes are coming from because this is well done. Maybe break up the wall of text.
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I'm not sure either; I just figured either not everyone liked Fluttermac (in my head I call it Macinshy lol) or they didn't approve of my portrayal of the characters. I'm also still new at writing for this universe so they probably are a little harsh on me. I'll take it as a learning experience.
He said words, Big Mac said words!!!! I loved this. I like the progression of them growing closer to each other too. I need more!
Adorable bit of character growth there.
Rarity, you eediot!!!
Keep up the good work
Maybe it would make more sense if I heard it aloud, but it feels like the rhytm of the song goes awry towards the end. In particular, 'everywhere' takes so long to say it's almost enough for an entire line on its own, yet it's squeezed in like it was aa single syllable...
If purple is both of them singing, what's orange?
's a nice song, btw. Entire chapter is really, but I don't often see a song made from scratch like that, so kudos.
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Thanks for the feedback. I know the rhythm gets wonky, maybe I'll go back in and fix it soon; I just wanted to come up with something original.
The orange text is actually red, but for some reason it sometimes shows up as orange, despite the code it uses; I'll try and fix that as well
I've been wondering what Fleur's deal is. It's another one of those relationships that the show would never bother to define.
Welcome back! I enjoy this kind of role reversal, since Big Mac is usually the rock, this is an adorable twist.
Daaaawwww. This story is so cute and fluffy and perfect. <3 I love Macinshy and you're capturing their characters perfectly. Great job!
Please tell me this fic isn't dead, it's one of the best i've read in a long time!
This was a sweet story! It was nice to see Fluttershy's tiny assertive side and Big Mac's softer side.