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Willow Arqueiro
I tend to be a bit willowy, and prone to hitting my opponents from afar.
Willow Arqueiro
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Don't you just love it when you get thumbs down but no comment why?
I know I sure do!
Futa? Meh.
OC x Canon? No.
11,000 words in one chapter? YEAH NO.
5322161
That's the first time I've seen someone say no to 11K words of pure smut.
5322199
3,000 to 5,000 words is enough. This is just dragged out.
5322208
Again, someone complaining about too much clop...
Not sure what to think of that
5322381
Well, there's big clop, then there's just mindless plot-less smut.
This is the latter.
(Also, it's poorly written, so yeah)
5322086
Well, there could be a multitude of reasons that we'll never know, but here's what I think.
You misspelled our. I've noticed that people will downvote a story just because of a simple mistake in either of the descriptions. Also, a lot of people won't even bother reading the story if they see errors in the description because it's a sure-fire way to tell the quality of the story. People make assumptions very quickly, and 9 times out of 10 they'll leave after downvoting without giving the story a look. Hell, people could just downvote the story because you said something to them that they didn't like or you wrote a story that they didn't agree with.
There is poor formatting here. Either make this all one paragraph, or hit enter one more time after the word "downstairs."
OKAY, here's the source of your problem. Since you've included this in your long description, something I highly recommend removing, you're basically telling us that you wrote a story about your friend (whose name really isn't all that inventive. I mean, come on, Lunar-tic?) who gets fucked in both the mouth and ass by AJ. Your story would be completely fine without that little fact, and that's probably the cause of most of the downvotes.
WOAH that would hurt like a bitch! First of all, I would suggest you use the word "expanded" instead of "exploding". Secondly, three to five times its size? Let's just think for a second. I'm just guessing here, but I'm pretty sure a horse dick is thicker than a human's by a longshot. If her dick is about 3 inches thick, then that would mean that the head of AJ's dick expanded 9 to 15 inches inside of the other pony's throat. Obviously this is not a good thing. ^^ I recommend just saying that it flared inside his throat.
5322465
Boom.
Right there, the perfect example of what I meant!
See, you provided feed back, and I changed it, changing the view more to the better. (Or so I hope)
You can't do that when they just down vote.
=P
Thanks for commenting!
5322404
XD
There was plenty of plot!
It was just getting rutted half the time.
5323240 Sorry, but I'm not to big on the 'magic junk from nowhere' stories. Considering her 'condition', I don't see how she could hide it without clothing. Her parents surely would have suspected something let alone another Apple. I know that don't show that stuff because of the rating, but still I don't think it's remotely plausible to keep that hidden from friends and kin.
I would like to apologize on behalf of all the idiots who downvoted this fic. I honestly couldn't see what was so deserving of all the downvotes! Sure, it's no Ivanhoe, but its a clop story. For what it is, (being a tale of futa Applejack fucking and being fucked by her coltfriend) it does its job just fine. Keep writing, and don't let the downvotes get you down, you can only improve from here!
5322381 There is never too much clop ever
This gave me a boner.
Get it? It's funny because my profile pic is a grim reaper!
This was glorious! I loved every bit of it, especially as it was rough, and you did so many great positions, filling every hole. It could have done better with some of the descriptions, but it was still hot the whole time.
5323232 Read this story again. I saw your comment and I think I have an idea why you might get a thumbs down.
Here it is:
You're on your phone. You also have fat thumbs. You try and press the 'read later' button, but your phone picks up 'like' instead. Now, since you cant tap 'like' again to get rid of the accidental like, (and you don't know if it's good yet) so you switch it to a 'dislike' because you don't like a website deciding what you enjoy, and are mad about it.
Boom! There you go!
Wow. That is, without a doubt, the laziest thing I've seen on FIMfiction. Great job.
6687630
Yep, without a doubt
great story, I wish there was more of this.
When changing POV you should make it a little more clear.
Don't you think that is cheating a little bit?
What are their positions?
Again it's very unclear what exactly their positions are. During a clop scene you need to be very precise with you descriptions as things can very easily get disorienting. Is Applejack's dick large enough to go from her crotch to her chin? Because if so that's huge.
With how overstimulated she is I would think Applejack can barely even move.