• Member Since 5th Sep, 2012
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Willow Arqueiro


I tend to be a bit willowy, and prone to hitting my opponents from afar.

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what is it supposed to be?:applejackunsure:

My sequel to RainbowFactory

You have to read Rainbow Factory in order for it to make sense

They escape the rainbow factory! Allright! "Reads more"
They try to shut down the factory cool. "Reads more."
An armory...What. "Reads more."
Rainbow Dash gets A bullet proof vest......Since when did Equestria issued guns? "Reads more."
Spike has dragon armor.........Is that a skyrim thing? "Reads more."
Not bad, can't wait to see hell break loose.

Its reaaly good. Are you planning on writing more? Oh and does adult spike have a moustache? :moustache:

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I was hoping to post the second and final chapter tonight, if I can wade through my swamp of homework. :rainbowdetermined2:

You... You killed my DASHIE
Love the story though
Scoot and Dash were bad ass
:rainbowkiss::scootangel:


With much love,
DoubleRainbow

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Thank you!! That really means alot to me. I'll try to make my other stories as good if not better as this one

1377090 eh... It's OK, but I don't thing the ponies would comprehend using contained explosions to propel a small projectile through a grooved tube at high speeds... (reason why I'm removing the gun from my OC...)

1377449 well said ponies have magic to use as guns instead.

1377457 Point, but unless you have a unicorn or Alicorn with you your screwed in that regard.

This was brilliant, good ending too.

I always thought the origional story lacked closure, good or bad, you just managed to scratch an itch I've had for ages.

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Are you female? If you are, can I hug and kiss you? That's the exact reason why I wrote this!!

Yeah. I do. Anyway, recomend any of your other stories?

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Yeah, Special Delivery if you're a Flyboy, especially if you're Marine Flyboy.

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Don't read Special Delivery if you are an USAF enthusist.

Hate flying planes so USAF is not good, and I'm looking at joining the marines, the real marines in the UK that is. :ajsmug:

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Awww yeah!! Go Marines!! You live in the UK? I live smack dab in the middle of the U.S.A., but a Marine is a Marine and I am more then likely going to join.. The first chapter or two are flying and then it's ground fighting.

NIce, Yeah, UK born and raised, applied to sandhurst today, got training this weekend, its going to ROCK!:rainbowdetermined2:

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Kick ass for this Okie, will ya?

Sure thing.oH and if you can, I would definatly join the marines.

Unless I get involved in some freak accident that cripples me I'm joining. Eeyup:eeyup:

This was great! A few minor problems, but great overall!

Great story no idea what you where worried about. Only one problem though, you used the word hand a lot at the end still got the message but i don't know kinda bothered me other then that awesome.:twilightsmile:

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