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defender2222


aka Mr. Chaos of the "Harry Potter: Pokemon Master Series", "Authors of Our Own Fate", and "A Man of Iron"

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Every year Canterlot puts on a play on Hearth's Warming Eve to celebrate the season. And while the traditional Founders Play will still be done, this year Princess Twilight Sparkle, at the suggestion of Princess Celestia to 'liven things up', has decided to put on a second play: the musical Les Petits Poneys. A tale of redemption, loss, and love, Twilight just knows that it will be a hit. But things rarely go as planned. With Twilight changing up roles to make the play more species-friendly, many of the actors failing to memorize their lines, ad libbing that totally changes the story, perfomrers using the play to achieve their own personal goals and desires, and other plays somehow bumbling their way into the production, this show will be one to truly remember.

Starring Twilight Sparkle, Shining Armor, Princess Cadence, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, Cheese Sandwich, Spike, Iron Will, Scootaloo, Apple Bloom, Sweetie Belle, and with guest appearances from many of your favorite characters, Les Petits Poneys will be the comedic event of the season.

Author's Note: Thank you to all that helped get this story in the Featured Box!

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Comments ( 44 )

This is already proving to be a wonderful disaster, I fear for any nearby tables. A good start although I'm slightly confused about the Finland song, but I liked the puns for some of other plays and eager to see both how much this play will derail and Twilight's ongoing battle with sanity.

Two small typos;
"was achance to", missing a space,
"problem, twilight", her name should be capitalized.

Can you hear the ponies sing
Singing the song of angry mares

I bet Discord's going to be watching as well and just revelling in all the chaos is causes. Or even joining in.

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That is a reference to the opening of one of my favorite musicals, Spamalot.

www.youtube.com/watch?v=svnAr1y5lxI
This will end well.

This seems to be set at some point where Twilight is still Celestia's apprentice. Probably the last Heart's Warming before the coronation. Or maybe it's earlier, considering Luna's speech patterns are the way they are.

I hope this takes place in the Scootaverse, doesn't matter if this is canon or not to that verse.

If it does take place before the coronation, then it's still before Queen Cheesy is pardoned, but she is an natural actress, and the Goddess of Drama, so I'm sure she'll find a way to be part of the play her dear Shiny is acting in.

I know I'm already overanalyzing, but I will still enjoy this as the lighthearted spoof it is supposed to be.

hmmm, I see your Finland, and I raise you a Norway.

Aside from a few typos and grammatical errors, I'm absolutely loving this. Can't wait for more!

I LOVE Les Miresabes! The Pinkie Pie and Cheese part :rainbowlaugh: I can't wait for more!

Rarity as Eponine and Spike as Marius is a stroke of genius. As is Pinkie and Cheese as the inn keepers. Scootaloo as young-Cosette I understand for the sake of having a pegasus in both parts. but I think she'd do a better Gavroche or is she double cast like Rarity? (can't think who else she's playing) Though I'm curious who the other five Mariuses (Marii? Mariode? I hate when plurals don't sound right no matter what you do) were. I hope at some point you give us a cast list for the play itself. I'm trying to figure out who Rainbow is playing.

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Applebloom is Gavroche and Sweetie Belle is a young Eponine. Rainbow Dash is Enjolras.

*Wags fist towards the sky*

BAAAABBBBBBIIIIEESSSSSSS!!!!!

Oh Twilight, if this was the only problem you were going to have in this play...

This is the reason I will never have children; they are too much trouble!

I have learned that restaurants provide free beard...

Why did I never got one? :pinkiegasp:

"He was arrested for several crimes, most notably stealing a loaf of bread."

"All this for a loaf of bread?"

Babies, the heralds and prelude to the growing disaster to come. Also I liked the part when Luna was insulting everyone by the virtue of Blueblood's book.

5334906 It seems to be serious business in Agrabah.

Gosh darnit, you beat me to the punch on writing a Les Mis AU- great job so far though!

*puts on a hat* saddle up men, we be going to war.

You know, I have done at leasty three of your comdies in succession...I hope this hasn't done anything to my san-PAW THE CHICKENS ARE DROWN- ity.

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What is sanity but a word crazy people use to try and force their reality to be the right one.


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Yup, pretty much.

:ajbemused:Who... would think it was a good idea to let b:flutterrage:ing Blue Blood write a book?

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Never

Underestimate

The Power

Of PRANCE BREAD!

Frozen! A very cute Frozen parody although somewhat unsettling as Rollypoly is Elsa.... I am enjoying all the different takes and liberties that the actors/actresses are having with their characters, this play is shaping up to be hilarious with each new addition/revision.

I would like to thank everyone, as my record continues of getting stories Featured in the Feature Box! Thank you for the faves and the reviews!

I love this, also you get points for realizing Los Pegasus is LA!

And so, somehow, the play manages to go on. I'm sure Twilight will still have the chance to compare prop tables to the real deal.
And considering there are actually a surprising ammount of Javert/Valjean shippers, I wonder if someone will start shipping their actors here.

Damn it, Cadence! Don't you understand what a tragedy is?! :twilightangry2:

Really, Cadence? You had one job, ONE JOB! :rainbowlaugh: And poor Applejack! I really enjoy this, can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

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This play is giving me the feeling of Noises Off, starring My CocaineMichael Caine.

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Pretty sure this was a tragedy. For Twilight. Gtfo Cadence. D:

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I will say that I am a huge fan of Darth and Droids...

"What, I can't enjoy the theater just because I like sports?"

Not at all, in fact, it's going into my headcanon.

“Was that part of the play?” Luna asked.

No, but with Cheese and Pinkie in this, it should be fun.

Mr. Cake, much to everyone's surprise, was able to play the role of a lecherous, corrupt boss with such feeling that it had even Pinkie, who knew him so well, was fighting full body shivers.

Impressive.

There, standing with a big smile on her face, was Dinky Hooves, wearing a ginger wig over her mane and dressed in a pretty little green dress.

This is going exactly where I think it is, isn't it?

Do you wanna build a snowman?

Knew it.

"...curse you and your cuteness," Twilight muttered.

She is cute.

"LET IT GO, LET IT GO! CAN'T EXTERMINATE ANYMORE!" Rollypolly the baby Dalek sang, a blonde wig attached to his dome and a blue dress wrapped around his armored shell.

*jaw hangs open* I, I, I don't even! Also, SOMEBODY MAKE THIS A FULL SONG! Please.

I mean, boy-howdy, bein' a politician? It’s practically a job requirement for you to be a criminal!"

BEST. LINE. EVER! SOMEBODY GIVE THIS MAN A CELESTIA DAMNED MEDAL! Also, Goddammit Nappa. I mean Cadence.

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I actually have two chapters done. I just need to edit them. Hopefully I can have the next chapter up pretty soon. Life gets in the way and I have been trapped but other projects that are a touch more pressing.

5319746 it is the music of the ponies Who will not be slavea again

I love the whole comedy of errors les mis but I think someone should also try to ponify the story whole and entire

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