• Member Since 14th Nov, 2014
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Danthebronyman


I love romances, mild gore, and comedies. I'm a new proofreader in the proof reader group. Look in there to find what i prefer to read, etc. I look forward to proofreading for you.

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A young PIA agent gets stranded in Ponyville, and who better to find him then PinkiePie, and RainbowDash! He learns the hard way that his job may be too dangerous.
Credit to http://www.deviantart.com/morelikethis/332754337 for the cover image

Rated T for: Alcohol references, mild violence, mature plot line, and mild language.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 2 )

Just a couple of small things

he replied,as he toke yet another drink from his flask.

*replied,(space)as* *took*

"I would be if it wern't for that stupid, "Princess TwilightSparkle" stealing my job as Director." he said angerlly, as he drank the last bits of liquid from his flask.

*weren't* *Twilight(space)Sparkle* *Director," he* *angrily*

That's all that stood out to me.
Hope this helps.

5317035 huh, I'll be darned. Thanks. I'll edit these when I get to a computer!

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