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Tempestus


FAN FICTION- Photon Prime - Discord: Titan0151#0717

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5263094 Thanks, I aim to please!

sems interesting. i will give it a read.

Hmm... An interesting start so far. Think I'll might give it a watch and see how this goes.

I'm now interested in this story.

Awesomeness, my friend. It won't be long before we see those ponies.

This chapter is a wonderful way to introduce the ponies to the Transformers.

You know how to keep a reader hooked.

Another exciting chapter well written!

Starscream is going a wol, and the Dinobots are going on the offensive?

This is getting good. I hope Celestia get's recused.

I enjoyed this chapter even if it does seem rushed.

5304313 Thanks, I did kind of rush it though, I am contemplating doing a edit on that chapter, perhaps a few more details on what happened to Pinkie and Celestia and a couple more combat scenes. I'll keep that in mind for the next chapter, which I am going to be finishing on Monday night. Thanks for the tip.

5305436 Okay so the chapter will not be done until Tuesday night, Wednesday at the latest a few things came up and I only now got back to my computer and it is past midnight. Goodnight and stay Brony my friend, till all are one. P.S. Sorry

If Tarantulas is here? :pinkiegasp:Will we also see Waspinator?!

5314723 Perhaps, not going to release any spoilers. Though I will say that he is one of a few others I am bringing into the story. :pinkiehappy:

That sergeant wouldn't happen to be based on Sgt. Slaughter, now would he? ;)

5318304 You got it, he is based on him so I really need to look up a few quotes from him to bring the character out fully. :yay: Glad somebody figured it out!

Bravo on yet another exciting chapter!

5830353 Ever heard of comedy? You should try it sometime.

Had no idea you updated this fic. I liked it, especially with Sgt. Slaughter's inclusion.

This chapter is very well done. The characters are amazing. I was most impressed with the Jetfire/Lyra dynamic.

Again, you understand the characters very well. What a pretty gripping chapter this was, Tempest. "Transformers" and "My Little Pony" for life!

Bravo, my friend. I'm literally feeling everything that's happening in this story. ^_^

This is a good first chapter as far as we are concerned. We don't really know much about Transformers but we like what we are reading.

6213787 I set it in the G1 realm as that is what I am most familiar with, seeing that I own the entire series from G1 to Beast Machines and run marathons every year from beginning to end what I would say needs work are the future GI Joe references I make seeing as though this fic is a massive smelting pit for Hasbro now, lol.

I am glad that the two of you are enjoying it!

I completely forgot that you updated this story. This chapter was pretty awesome!

Impressive character development like always, my good friend. :)

Okay I know this story seems to be dead, but it just has to be asked.

Why is there a Valkyrie on the cover?

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Not dead, just... I am working on figuring out the last bit... I want it to be perfect... rewrites are the devil.

As for the VF-1S... are you familair with what Jetfire looks like and how difficult it is to find a good PNG file for him that fits that particular model?

https://goo.gl/images/Iqm4hh

What can I say... I am a nerd.

Okay so... it is 2019, I am still at the same roadblock... but... Does anyone wish to aid ne in finishing this story, I need a muse, and idea bouncer... mostly just to figure out how best to have them all get back together for the climax, which I will admit will be part of the next say, three chapters perhaps.

Any takers?

Update soon, also as I have just re-read this I find myself cringing. Would anypony or anybot wish to aid me in a bit of editing?

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