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Tempestus


FAN FICTION- Photon Prime

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Lord Tempestus once lead armies under the banner of King Lunarum. Five crusades, five victories. Only, his final crusade ended in disaster with the banishment of the Crystal Empire. A thousand years later the Captain General is pulled out of the dungeon and brought back into the light. Without wars to fight, and with Equestria no longer in need of his military prowess he finds himself at a loss of what to do. Life finds him, and he decides to share his story with those who will listen.

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 28 )

Informative: You have this Unit's attention.

So he makes Scoots his 3rd daughter.... so who will be his wife? Rainbow Dash? Twilight? I am watching this story.

It's a good start. I will be looking for more.

Loving it so far, cant wait for more!

This was quite enjoyable, though I am curious about who the “bat pony” mentioned in the first chapter is.

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No worries, time shall tell. :twilightsmile:

"No, wooden town, lots of thatch, how is your insurance?"

She lives in Ponyville, her insurance is good :moustache:

If you don't (or do) mind, i'm gonna just download your image. Much better than the more popular dragon-pony hybrids on the internet in my opinion.
Exhibit A: static.dhne.ws/wp-content/uploads/2012/11/dragon_ponies_set_1_by_blood_asp0123-d5mlyet.png
Need i say more?

Tempestus :heart: Rainbow Dash? Please? :scootangel:

I really like this and am looking forward to more. Interesting character.

Minor typo.

I stood in the harsh rain for a full minuet staring at where the four had left before sheathing my sword and walking to Scootaloo.

There are advantages to not being able to read. Since we listen to these, its easy to catch things the eye simply glides over.

The Monk
“On her doorstep was Twilight Sparkle. While Derpy deeply respected the mare, like most in Ponyville, they wished she'd either switch to decaf, or start hitting the harder stuff.” -Dan_s Comments

Do Tempestus and Tempest Shadow meet in this story?

This gets a fav and a watch! :pinkiehappy:

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I had not planned on it, but may do it in a later chapter or a AU to this AU.

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Go right ahead, artwork is by Pridark commissioned for this story and my profile picture.

More artwork to come in due time.

If you would like the full picture PM me.

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That is true, but it was too good to pass up the reference.

:scootangel: yea half dragon & pony
:unsuresweetie: Don't let you know who find out
:applecry: Oh my.... Looks like they did.
:moustache::heart::raritywink:

I have to say I absolutely love this story so far. It's a little fast paced for me, however the set up is very exciting. I look forward to seeing the next chapter.

More please shio oc to rainbow Dash or etc.

I love this so much!!! So wholesome so far :scootangel: Please keep this up!

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Wholesome is a new word to describe on of my fics. Thank you, next chapter should be out in the middle of next month.

HeLlO dArKnEsS mY oLd FrIeNd

"I is an uncommon skill, if you don't do it right then bad things can and will happen." I found myself drawn towards a splash of prismatic brilliance behind the alicorn.

It?
Or do “Aye, it is...”

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My editor is taking his sweet time, alas I only read through it 5 times before posting it...

It will be fixed, be warned there is another typo in Chapter 2 as well.

I am too quick! I have read the chapter already!

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