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The Great Derpsby

The Great Derpsby #1 · Oct 30th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter 9 - The Future ·

This doesn't really deserve the rating it has, and that's coming from someone who doesn't overly like making Blueblood into a monster instead of just a clueless douche.

So, upvoted for great justice.

Tarox

Tarox #2 · Oct 30th, 2014 · · · Chapter 8 - The past ·

Everything about this story so far has been fantastic. Got a good chuckle at the cameo from the Dazzlings
Now for Blueblood's 'revenge'. It works, it's perfect for the kind of character you've given him. I can't say I didn't see it coming either. All that having been said, can I end him now?

linksbro1

linksbro1 #3 · Oct 31st, 2014 · · 1 · Chapter 8 - The past ·

PLEASE
HAVE BLOODBLOOD KILLED
IN THE MOST HORRIFIC AND PAINFUL WAY IMAGINABLE

P.S.
awesome story
melovesyoulongtime

Crystal Static

Crystal Static #4 · Nov 9th, 2014 · · · Chapter 9 - The Future ·

I wish the ending wasn't so abrupt, but overall, this was a great fic.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #5 · Nov 9th, 2014 · 2 · · Chapter 9 - The Future ·

5245972 I was never happy with the end. Once the contest it is entered into finishes up and I have some time spare, I'm going to go back and give it a serious rewrite.

linksbro1

linksbro1 #6 · Nov 14th, 2014 · · 1 · Chapter 9 - The Future ·

5246209
Rewrite it so Blueblood SUFFERS MORE and Cheerilee doesn't get raped
MAKE BLUEBLOOD IMMORTAL, FEED HIS BODY INTO A WOOD CHIPPER UNTIL ONLY HIS HEAD IS LEFT, AND SEND HIS HEAD TO THE CENTER OF THE SUN, SO HE CAN EXPERIENCE AN ETERNITY IN A FIRE WORSE THAN HELL
If you can think of a worse fate, go with that instead
...
melovesyoulongtime
storysogood
10/10

Jane_Shadow