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The Lost Winchester


"Just take those old records off the shelf, I'll sit and listen to 'em by myself." Just your average friend that likes ponies, good music and write horse words.

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I can already tell this is going to get better!

... Alright, you have an insta favorite here if you can keep this on.
Minor grammar issue. You've got several "in" where you should have "on instead.

5189126 :pinkiegasp: Glad you liked it and I hope to keep a good level on it

5189641 :ajsmug: Thanks a lot, and, I´ll need to be more careful with that issue for further chapters :twilightblush:

You have my attention.:twilightsmile:

You might want to fix your title, there's a bit of space in the don't, but so far I like your story.

Comment posted by The Lost Winchester deleted Oct 27th, 2014

Dang it, someone beat me too it!

Well, good luck friend... :ajsleepy:

Quite interesting so far, please do continue I want to see where this is going :pinkiehappy:

Nice mate Stalker-san is pleased :yay:

This story is pretty good so far, keep it up. Is Booker gonna be wanted by everyone.....again?

5190812 Hey thanks :ajsmug:

5191895 :yay: :rainbowkiss:

5203875 Stalker san noticed me? :pinkiegasp:

5206775 Well, you will have to wait :trollestia:

5213268 Your story is a nice offering to Senpai :) :ajsmug:

5329500 Oh stop it you :rainbowkiss::twilightblush: please, can you tell me what likes you of this story?

5336396 I can't say I guess I like all of it.

OH! those timbrwolfes will regret they messed with dewit.

One of the best Bioshock Crossovers I've seen will be watching

5486914 Thanks for the compliment, I'm so glad you liked it :twilightblush::twilightsmile:

dam you celestia you bitch y you do this

What a fucking whore.

IT LIVES!!!!

Also, I fully expect the Luteces to show up, because they appeared in pony form in the show itself (Season 4, Trade ya!)

When can we see the next chap up?

6473916 Well... that's a good question, by now I have half of the next chapter written, I will try to have it finished by the end of the week :twilightblush::twilightsmile:

Don't worry I believe we can wait if you need this time for your story as long as it doesn't die:twilightsmile:

6465554 and i thought that iwas the only one wh noticed that did you also found the other bioshock reference in that episode?

Yus. The shotty and fire combo!

7235086 personaly, I think I favor the posseson and MG combo..or maybe the "pull and bang" combo

You will continue this story? If you continue and after you finish, you could make Elizabeth in Equestria in human form?

7386138 well, yes, I will continue writing this one until I finish it, after all it is my second most important project, is just that the next updates will take some more time to be ready, mostly because I've been really busy and not feeling that good for the last couple of weeks, but don't worry, I hope to have the next chapter finished by the end of the month, as for a story with Elizabeth as the protagonist, I need to think about it, it could turn into an interesting project, but first let's see how this one will end.

And this is why Luna is best pony, not Celestia. Also why are there no luna emotes?

7436705 Thanks for taking the time to read this story :yay:, also, I already fixed the list of characters and best pony appears in it now.

To disobey a royal order of a country your not a part of is... well perfectly fine

Can't wait till next chapter :pinkiehappy:
MUST CONTAIN EXCITEMENT!
MUST WAIT FOR BOOKER TO KICK SOME BUTT!:pinkiecrazy:

7437006 why did you stop

7576535 Hmmmm... are you referring to me ending the chapter as I did (as I intended it to end:trollestia:) or are you thinking that perhaps I already abandoned this story:raritycry:? If so, you don't have to worry my friend:raritywink:, I'm still working on it, is just that I'm a very slow writer:twilightoops:, more so when the ideas seems to come and go:facehoof:, but, I'll do my best to give you all an update by the end of the week, maybe saturday or sunday:rainbowdetermined2:.

Great chapter

Finally got a chance to read this chapter, and damn some blood was spilled :pinkiecrazy:
Great idea making booker use vigor combinations :rainbowdetermined2:

I dont know when or how but i need moar chapters now i demand then at once or i shall spontaneously combust. -vinyl

7648194 nope, you can't just combust like that, if you do so, you'll never know how everything will end for DeWitt :raritywink:

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