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The Lost Winchester
"Just take those old records off the shelf, I'll sit and listen to 'em by myself." Just your average friend that likes ponies, good music and write horse words.
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Huh, first time I've seen this ship. Nicely done.
A not so usual pairing but I can't say that I haven't seen it. I like how it went being your first M fic I didn't see anything bad only small grammar errors but besides that good job.
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Hmm, I was expecting a darker ending considering the nature of this sort of ship. And was mildly disapointed at the lack of detail in the actual clop. But overall this was a plesant read and it would be intresting to see where this relationship would go. Even if this isnt a reformed story having Sombra forced to adapt and choose between the mare he wants and his dreams of domination... i wouldent mind seeing wherr this story would go.
7732752 Hi, thanks for the comment. I have to be honest, at first the story had the "Dark" tag, I mean, Applejack playing with the severed horn of a unicorn kind of sounds weird, but then I realized that it wasn't that necessary at all so I discarded it. Now, in the moment I reached the actual clop part of the story, someone interrupted my thoughts and I lose many ideas, perhaps I should give it a second look and add more detailed scenes for it to be more explicit.
Regarding to the reformed Sombra, the ending is not really clear about it, as you say, a sequel doesn't sound that bad, I even planned to have a final scene where Fluttershy witnessed what they did and kind lusted for the King, maybe I can work with that path and as you said, see where the story goes.
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Thats great, I know how hard it is to stay in the moment while writeing clop. On the one hand your constantly looking over your sholder in fear someone you know will get a peek at the depraviry of your mind. On the other you have to pause to remain objective and not write his "throbing member" or "her wet walls" 30 times every other sentance. So I dont judge it too harshly just point it out as an area to focus on improving.
As for a voyure Fluttershy... I love it! So much potential, each of the mane six could have their own hangup with Sombra. Or it could be part of his power. Adding a dark tag wouldent be too unwarranted if this was part of some Dastardly master plan. Or go another rout and find that Sombra has had his will to rule sucked out of him, almost literally... by Six wonton mares.
All food for though as you plan your next endevor.
Who's to say Applejacks dream isn't just a dream?
Wow....this was great! I loved seeing a romantic Sombra. Great job! Sombrajack is a pairing I haven't heard of before, but I like it!
I really liked this story I wonder if Applejack's dream was a dream or a prediction of the future
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Glad to see that people still read this one and try to find the ending less ambiguous.
Perhaps I should try and see if a sequel is plausible.